|Reviews for A Respite|
| Aileil chapter 1 . 5/3
You did a lovely job with the characterizations of both Raw and Glitch. Also, you made me wonder: At the beginning, Glitch sees the other people in the room as unhappy/stressed, but once he's back to his generally cheerful self, he sees DG smiling and percieves Cain and Tutor's interaction as more friendly. So, did the interactions between the others improve over the scene, or did Glitch just miss the positive side while he was feeling overwhelmed and upset?
Either way, it is a sweet insert. Thank you. :)
| Ambiguous Umbra chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
An excellent character study of Glitch. He is one of the most complex and tragic characters in the mini series and you did a great job getting inside his head. Quality work.
| Scarecrow047 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Very sweet. I like what you did with Raw. Very Jasper-ish :D
| Gabrielle Lawson chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Good story. I loved the faces of everyone after his memories were shown. That was angst, but they gave him respect and admiration with, yes, pity. You did good with this.
| Lyre-19 chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Aw! so sweet! You wrote Glitch's anguish and Raw's gentleness very well!
...man, i tell you...this section on went up so fast! Not even a week after the series premires and already over 50 fanfictions!0 _ o...
anyway, really cute oneshot! Happy writing!