Reviews for spiralling inward
Beautiful Delirium chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
AH! WHY HAS NO ONE REVIEWED THIS YET! i love the way you write. it's full of passion and even the faint bittersweet romance. this was amazing. you captured the characters PERFECTLY! this was beautiful. my favorite line(s) had to be:

"It's what I want," Oriya says. He can feel Muraki's fingers on the pulse on his neck. "I think tonight I want to be your victim."

"I think tonight," Muraki says, and now Oriya knows he's stepped over that line, "I think tonight I'll make you my victim.

it gave me shudders!