|Reviews for Observation|
| rioludoodle chapter 1 . 2/9
This story is just plain brilliant. I love things from Shikamaru's point of view, and this is the best one-shot I've ever read. The writing's brilliant, and the idea's brilliant, and I loved the first part with the academy days. It's brilliant.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14
This. Is. Beautiful.
| 64teeth chapter 1 . 1/11
great story, very well written and very in character as Shikamaru :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
That was one of the most wonderful things I have ever read. I almost cannot describe the feelings brought out by this, but it is the same feeling I get every time I am around the plot of naruto.
| Dersite chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Oh my GOD this is BEAUTIFUL *smooches your face*
| Ezra Scarlet chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
wow, u r a really talented writer. Ive been reading some of your other stories, and may i say that they r bloody brilliant. Thankyou so much for writing so awesomely, and angst of all things! Its hard to find good angst stories these days that arent yaoi or cliched, ect,ect. As u can see, ive loved some of your stories so much that ive added them to my community! Please come back soon and continue to write!
On another note, this story was amazing. I myself agree with you that someone like shikamaru is bound to notice naruto, and realize the impact he has on people. Which is why i love this story and think its totally awesome. Thankyou!
| Neellok chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Love, love love this look inside Shikamaru's head. I always wondered his reason for saying "I would follow him." When his dad asked about Naruto. I really like the thought of him watching Naruto from the beginning.
| LunarStar98 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
: ) Like it a lot good work.
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
If this what really Shikamaru's real view... Must be too complicated...!
| Myboobseclipsethesun chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
That was really good! I like how in tune it was with the real Shika, so I could imagine him saying all of this.
MAKE MORE SOMEHOW.
| chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Very perspective and true. :)
| goddessa39 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Pretty awesome. Naruto's rise to power through a lazy eye.
| Rennousuke chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Wow, what an interesting point of view for Shikamaru. I really never thought of it that way but this seems to make much more sense to what I was thinking.
Good work !
| McKazekage chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I like this, I like seeing from Shikamaru's perspective, it makes it more interesting!
| acrimony1029341 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
An excellent story, makes sense with cannon and still makes Naruto seem far better than he is depicted, well done and keep it up!