Reviews for Fragile Thread
Gaara the Bloody chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Hm... poor little Ayane. I guess I am a fan of happy endings but I this one seems to be more like it should be. As you said by your self, some things could not be repaired. Some things persons do not belong together. This one counts for Ayane, Kasumi and Hayate. I liked the sad tone of the story
Scarletstar20 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
I Like it, I really do. The conversation between Ayane and Kasumi is really in character. You managed to walk the thin line and not fall into the usual pitfalls of Ayane being too hostile and Kasumi being too sweet. I can't rightly comment on the Ayane exile after omega, because unfortunately, I never played dead or alive three, even if, as I suspect that is an element that you added yourself, it is a wonderful AU story. The only thing that jarred me a little bit was Hayate. There has been evidence (In the beginning of DOA 2 Hardcore) that he has some kind feelings for Ayane, so it seems out of character for him to coldly dismiss her.