|Reviews for Kunoichis Like Us|
| SuperMarioForever2 chapter 24 . 1/31
This perhaps the best Dead or Alive story I've ever read. When will you continue the story? Also, how did you make a French character without being stereotypical?
| REAL chapter 2 . 11/16/2014
I keep saying this to other ppl on fanfic, ppl with GARBAGE GARBAGE KASUMI ESCORT SERVICE, AND KASUMI HAVING 3 KIDS, ONE WITH DEVIL GENE STORIES.
This story is how it should be written, most ppl stay in character, and don't try to act phony.
My dad's American, and my mom is french'.
YOU WANT SOME MORE CHEESE? coz that is cheesy and cliché as shit!
| AntagonistLegionFaction chapter 8 . 9/21/2014
For one who has written a story for a fighting game series, this has caught my attention. And I say this story is actually pretty good! I love the Alex Kane O.C you've written. Really reminds me of myself growing up in my adolescence years. Though I don't know whether a kunoichi would appear to show me how life can be good. lol. I also loved how you expand Kasumi's character more into this. Her kindness and compassion are always her special traits in the DOA series, even as a shinobi. She's always viewed as fanservice entirely by many others. But they don't know what Kasumi has other than her physical beauty, even as a character in a fighting game series known for the ladies.
I got to admit, the story got me captivated that I've become to immersed into the story to even write a review! Maybe it's just me. There were the few obvious grammar mistakes I've noticed, but other than that, I would say this has been the fanfic that has my eyes caught to the screen for a long time since I haven't really caught with fanfiction a lot for a loooong time.
All my praise goes to you.
| MindEngine95 chapter 24 . 9/6/2014
What happened to this series, I was ready for the next chapter?
| The Great Potato chapter 24 . 7/13/2014
I love this story! Very well written. Thanks for taking the time to write this for last few years and I hoping is going well for you. :)
| Destrark chapter 15 . 6/2/2014
I knew what was going to happen as soon as Daisuke started talking with his friends, just didnt expect Kasumi to be right outside. Guess thats what I get for underestimating a kunoichi right?
| Destrark chapter 11 . 6/2/2014
...Sneaky girl :)
| Destrark chapter 8 . 6/2/2014
I love your characterisation, they act like real people with real motivations and personalities. Even without knowing anything about the setting or the stuff behind Kasumi and the other Ninjas' backstory I can enjoy the story as its not completely taken over by Ninja stuff that I'd have to find out about to know whats happening.
| Z-MILL-Z chapter 3 . 4/5/2014
On the last bit all I can say is wasn't expexting that
| CranberryVishnu chapter 5 . 3/30/2014
Okay. This story is good. I'm 5 chapters in and I have to tear myself away but I will be coming back to read the rest soon! You are doing a fantastic job with your characters. Each one is distinct and has a voice that you are careful to keep consistent. And almost no action. No big fights - you don't pile on the sex - and you know what - I don't miss it! And the reason why is the dialog - WOW. You know what people think - how they feel - what they would say - really say. No "canned speech" but real language that I can actually imagine people would say. It's clear you pay attention to those details and it shows in your writing. I have to stop reading for now but I know I'll be blazing through this whole story. Great job - your characters are real people. They just jump off the page. You handle Kasumi, Ryu and Hyate excellently blening their larger than life characters seamlessly into everyday situations. I like Alex. He's a complicated guy who doesn't come off as a jerk or a whiner - but a nice guy once you get to know him. His pal at the restaurant is a great foil for him too. Man, I could go on and on. Great story - glad I found it!
| enigma95 chapter 24 . 2/24/2014
for one day finally caught up and so this is where ayane gets in ahahahahaha hope u update soon my firnd awesome sotry
| enigma95 chapter 23 . 2/24/2014
hahahahahhahahah time to torment u! u little b***** (no offense but feels like saying it)
| enigma95 chapter 22 . 2/24/2014
ahahahhaha yey one of them finally appeared! but w8 when will the others appear? such as the armstrong... kokoro eliot and the drunken master?
| enigma95 chapter 19 . 2/24/2014
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahah finally they are back! but still he gotta fix that damn relationship w/ nanako or hell take them all 3 ahhaahhahahaha
| enigma95 chapter 17 . 2/24/2014
hmmmmmm this is getting way too dramatic and i don't see ayane jumping into the scene yet