Reviews for Slip Ups
uirgiliana chapter 9 . 2/10/2013
This is really great! :)
LunaBianca chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I like how this piece captures Peter's frustration and obliviousness about some things.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/28/2013
loved all of it very well written love all the chapter and so much emotion
Ailavyn Siniyash chapter 9 . 1/16/2013
Oh, beautiful! All of it! But you haven't updated in YEARS...

My personal favorite was the interlude; I love the observations of non-Pevensies on the Pevensies. Marvelous writing all around, and I really hope you continue!

Now, back to rereading that interlude...

Ailavyn Siniyash
Guest chapter 9 . 1/1/2013
I love your story, i have been looking for a story like this for ages! And i must say... ITS BRILLIANT! I love it, please update!

P.s love all the peter scenes!

M. of the Mountains chapter 9 . 12/31/2012
Lovely, lovely, lovely!
AnnAisu chapter 9 . 11/8/2012
The time between drabbles is very, very long indeed... :,,,,,(
FashionablyHospitable chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This story promises to be a good one.
Batty Buttercups chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
Beautifully written! I could see events taking place as I read. I love how you used little choices of diction - cloak before jacket - to show how Edmund is always forced to remember himself to be in England, not Narnia. The 'angst' at the end suited the context and character fine. Enjoying this drabble series very much!
Guest chapter 5 . 10/7/2012
Winter's Folly chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
Winter's Folly chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
"Btw, it was pointed out to me by a reviewer that I might have sounded a bit demanding in my previous chapter when I asked for reviews and I just want to say if I offended anyone, I completely apologise! I didn't mean for it to sound that way, I was just a bit frustrated over the fact that on my last one shot I got half as many reviews as favourites and the hits were off the charts and I thought that if you fav the story you ought to at least review once! But anyway, I hope that you can all review this time, pretty please?"
demanding is good.
stars shine out chapter 9 . 9/7/2012
Brilliant - I'm loving this story! Please update soon!
Confessions of a Short Girl chapter 9 . 8/27/2012
Oh that way just lovely, I love yh emotion that you've been able to capture in each chapter.
Murphy AT chapter 9 . 8/19/2012
Very wonderful! I'm glad you've shown her fighting to stay in denial, because it mst have taken a serious amount of stubborn effort to deny the existence of 15 years of memories. Honestly, I'm surprised she's not more unhinged.
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