you are a writer after my own heart.

i'm not sure how they do english classes where you're from, but in the states we study the concepts of diction and syntax as if they're diseases with symptoms or crimes with clues-a backwards buildup approach. we're taught to recognize word choice and sentence structure AFTER we've finished reading and then trace our way back to see what its effect is because so often we don't notice it AS we're reading. which is why i delight in writing like yours, because there's no way you can't notice it while you're reading. it's just too too good.

well done. keep writing!

That was EXCELLENT! Great job. I loved it. You are a wizard as well- your word choice and your characterization was inspiring! Now watch as I save it as a favorite...

I still bear the burden of having not seen the second series (Stupid BBC America!) but once I do, I shall recognize this character immediately. Though I suspect the show writers do not do him the justice you did. Your lyrical style works so well in prose because you are able to 'flower' the ideas, from petal to stem, in vivid ways.

Wonderful insight into the all too brief but lovable character of the fool. I tip my hat to you.

MyDearDelirious

Brilliant! I really liked it!

The Fool was such a fun character; I kind of wanted him to become part of the regular cast. XD

Very well written. You're quite talented!