|Reviews for Outcast|
| HailFirePeaks chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
I've only read the summery and chapter 1 so far but it sounds like its going to be great!
| KivaEnergyArms chapter 6 . 12/31/2007
I really like it. Keep up the good work. Everyone could have guessed Liyue was going to be the next Avatar
| zenthois chapter 4 . 12/20/2007
The titleless chapter? haha...oh such a close kiss lol
| zenthois chapter 3 . 12/20/2007
I'm reading this! lol, even though I think I'm the only one so far... well done on this chapter!
very unique! ;)
| zenthois chapter 2 . 12/20/2007
Ahh, how said for Liyue! do make fun of her yeah rotten kids! lol
You spelt came wrong, so to point out every mistake, I do like it.
| zenthois chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
nice so far, but it was kinda short, oh and I think it's supossed to be "Helped up his wife"
but it's original! yeah for you ;)