Reviews for Sacrifices
cfigueroa78 chapter 12 . 5/5
Never surprised me that a baby is all it takes for Rosalie to stop being a bitch. I really wish Bella would stop acting like she needs anyone’s forgiveness. She’s worse now than she was as a teenager.
BWTHHYBL chapter 59 . 4/3
Love this FanFiction!
PeevesTwinBrother chapter 1 . 3/18
Genuinely couldn't read it all the way through the first 10 chapters. The language is so OOC and you stretched the same content over and over again.
Savkelly chapter 59 . 3/14
What a beautiful story... thank you for sharing it with us. I am having a hard time with my fan fiction. I have stopped so far at 176,000 words... I’m writing to you on my iPhone which isn’t logged into fan fiction. But it’s SavKelly... anyways... I always believed that if Jacob and Bella came to be together, that no matter what, she would always choose Edward... and so far I’m having the major difficulties of making that happen since in my fan fiction, her and Jacob are just so... attuned with each other... but I need to follow the cannon of twilight that Bella and Edward are soulmates. I’ve been a break on finishing it, but I will come to figure out how to do it eventually. My issue is... not making it seem like Bella used Jacob as a crutch... and I know my readers will definitely think that’s true. It’s hard... :/
brownskin01 chapter 6 . 2/18
Bella is annoying...stop placating people. be mad. bruh man left you
Nicolerh2010 chapter 18 . 12/28/2020
I like the plot, but the dialogue is killing me. No one talks like they're talking outside of an episode of Frasier. It's stiff, overly formal, and awkward. Fix that, and you have a great story on your hands
GrimoireofParadoxes chapter 8 . 12/19/2020
Thank you for writing this fic! I am loving the characterization of Bella. She is broken from her losses but she picks up the pieces to start again. On another note, maybe it's just my personality but Alice and Edward are annoying me a lot here. The sheer audacity to demand answers from Bella after being gone for so long is baffling. Obviously, Bella owes them nothing.
I do understand that this is all happening for the sake of the plot. xD
mizbluff chapter 59 . 12/7/2020
beautiful beautiful ending. wasn't too keen on it at first because of the whole jacob thing but it worked and it's such a lovely story I wish you had more
sue1zide chapter 3 . 11/25/2020
Why does she owe them an explanation? Pretty high handed of them.
I’m not a big fan of most Alice’s but I would love for Bella to slap her silly.
CaffeineMom chapter 59 . 11/9/2020
I don't know if you are still reading reviews, but I wanted to say "Thank you" for sticking with this story and finishing it.
I have had many many sleepless nights and the world of Fan Ficiton has got me through this crappy year.

Hope you are well and God Bless...
k chapter 58 . 11/1/2020
Wonderfully written story. Some heartbreak but HEA eventually. Thank you for sharing your delightful story.
ninny 1 chapter 59 . 10/18/2020
Wonderful
RoseMarie95 chapter 1 . 9/23/2020
Amazing story! A book has NEVER made me cry until this one. It was fantastic writing and I really enjoyed it. Definitely one of those stories that have you thinking about it long after you finish it.
paradisevy chapter 40 . 9/8/2020
I’m about halfway through this and I just wanted to say that I’m really enjoying it. I really am just tickled with Edward wooing her relentlessly. Over the years I’ve become much more Team Jacob, but this is an Edward I can get on board with! Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us
Hi chapter 1 . 8/30/2020
Ok, I'm confused
How many years is this post new moon ? How old is BELLA?
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