Didn’t anyone look for her while she changed?

The Cullen’s sound two faced to me.

My first thought was that he imprinted on the nurse. Score 1 for me!

Why is Bella so sickeningly sweet and forgiving?
I’m angry for her.

Absolutely phenomenal reading this story beginning to end. Its hard reading fan fiction sometimes because your reading Amateur work, but the best part of reading a good fan fiction is seeing the transition between an ok writer to a writer of considerable talent. I hope someday you might consider writing your own stories, with your own characters. You’re an amazing writer, thank you for posting such a good story!

Loved this story, it was such an interesting twist on Edward’s New Moon departure.

Your story had been on my TBR list for ages. I felt quite daunted by the sheer number of chapters and words and often turned to shorter stories to read first. Well this weekend I decided I was going to start and I'm so glad I did. I could not put it down. I think I'll be bleary eyed at work for the rest of the week! It was so good. I loved your twist to the story, the maturity of your twilight characters and how to adapted them to the new storyline. I even love how you tied up all the loose ends in a perfect bow with a HEA. Thank you so much and I only wish I had read it sooner. I do hope you still see reviews and know people are still reading your words.

I don't know if you still see the reviews of your story but I wanted to say how much I enjoyed it and also how grateful I am that you wrapped it up so well with the epilogue.

I’m finally done with reading it and I absolutely loved this story. I loved how it’s the same characters I loved back when I was a teenager but they’re more to my mature taste now. Thank you for taking the time to write this mama

This. Was. Amazing.

I laughed, I CRIED, I devoured every word. This is the story we deserved. Thank you so so much for writing it.

This story is starting to piss me off. Bella is pathetic. Great writing but Bella needs a backbone

Bella is such a a pushover. It's pathetic. Bella can stand up to a human but she can't to the Cullen's?

I am crying again. Such a great story so well written.
I think thats 4 times I have read.
Thanks again.

I am speechless. It was beautiful and touching. The ending that we all awaited.

The confederate flag plate on jaspers car just made me remember he’s an actual racist…