Reviews for Sacrifices
KaitlynMasenCullen27 chapter 21 . 1/27/2008
O! I love this story. I'm so pulled in so please please please update soon!
RomanceOfTheSky chapter 21 . 1/27/2008
This is really great. You've done a very good job with all of this. The foreshadowing and planning in advance is really good and adds a whole new depth to the material. I hope you update soon because I really want to see where you go from here.

One mistake I did want to point out was that when Bella first tells Alice how old Grace is, she says six. When the same scene is later recounted by Edward, she says five. I was just wondering what her real age was.
Sparcle chapter 21 . 1/26/2008
stunning, the best Bella story that i have ever read on fanfiction, wow, you are amazying, and just wow, i love it so much, plese get the next chapter up. i just love your style, it's written so much like stephenye's style, it seems that its her writing. you are amazying.
Bookworm-TGEC chapter 20 . 1/26/2008
I luv this fanfic and I can't wait for the update , waiting drives me crazy but its always worth it. I cant wait for the next chapter!
deletethisaccountpleasenthanks chapter 21 . 1/26/2008
asdfghjlz! a cliff! *sigh*

I really want to know what happens. Please update soon.

I actually cried when I read about Charlie & I felt so bad for Bella when I read about Jacob's imprint. The descriptions were so detailed they seemed real.
sHaRmAiNe chapter 21 . 1/26/2008
ooh... i can't wait for the next chapter! the story was so good... i just want to share this lyrics of the song Leave by Jojo...

"Cause I know about her (who) and I wonder (why) how I bought all the lies

You said that you would treat me right...

...Tell me why you're looking so confused

When I'm the one who didn't know the truth

How could you ever be so cold"

*i thought it was good for Bella and Jake... haha...*
Looking4MyEdward chapter 21 . 1/26/2008
Coolness. Update soon! Pretty please!
tu es mon ame chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
o that was a great chapter! i loved it. i knew it would have been victoria but the whole not killing her just changing her to kill her daughter thing was really clever! edward needs to control his temper :) (nearly finished a new chap) :D
Ine-sama chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
YES!

sorry :0)

edward's FACE...

i know that must have hurt him badly when bella was telling victoria about him leaving :'-(
debisue chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
I had a feeling it was Victoria that changed her! What I am surprised about is that Bella is the one that finished her off! Good twist! I am guessing that is the next chapter? What happened after Bella was changed?

You did a great job with this chapter! It lived up to my expectations!
bittersweetromance123 chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
wow bella killed victoria? update as soon as possible!
Kinkygeek chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
I must say, that out of all the FanFics I have read this has to be my favorite. All the characters are acting as they should, your wording when they speak is even in character! I really LOVE it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
nyckiii chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
omg i cannot w8 to hear wat happens next!

i totally luv this story! its like the fav out of my favs!

plze update soon! ;)
watata chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
whoa... bella killed victoria? and didn't kill Grace, bella is exceptional, even when life doens't show her a good side...

You got bella's spirit there.
PocketofChange chapter 21 . 1/25/2008
oh grl... that was a hella good chapter. not even joshing you one bit. and i was slightly freaked out when i saw the words i'm leaving with edward's name after it ... but then i read and was like, alriight. the world makes sense. i would just like to thank you soo much for writing this chapter. its a long story, but basically you made my day just about a bazillion times better. i was about to go up to an authority figure in my life and punch them in the back of the head ... then i was like, maybe i'll just check my email first and ... BAM! there was an update. lucky lucky me. so it calmed me down and i no longer felt the upmost need to and punch my director in the back of the head. end of story. although i still want to ... no i just don't have to. sorry for the ramble. but i just wanted to thank you for preventing me from doing something i am SURE i would have regretted. i CANNOT wait for the next chapter. ... 8)
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