Reviews for Mistress
angie2282 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
This was amazing! I love Adam's 'head voice' and his thoughts throughout the whole thing are amazingly realistic. The ending was sort of bittersweet but really it was great.
GodGudKami chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Poor Adam... Why must he always go through all the crap? He's the cuter one, after all. It should be Lawrence who goes through more! Why can't Lawrence just leave his ugly wife and daughter and stay with and comfort the adorable little Adam? He's so adorable, after all!
Sammy07 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Aw... Adam puts up with so much crap from Lawrence in your fics. I can't say mine are much better, but someone really needs to give that man a big kick where it hurts! Maybe then he'll start treating Adam a little more kindly. :(
nicoleb chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Aw... That's so sad. But kind of happy, too, since they're together. *Sob.*
Audra Markwell chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
the voice in Adam's head is brutal! Well written, though.
Chernabog'sDaughter chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Well... I must say I liked it. Not too kinky, and good written. I see Adam's accent pops in a few times. God!

(By the way, Adam is a fine piece of a... A little bit scrawny perhaps, but still...)