|Reviews for A Little Tinkering|
| jessi chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Excellent story, I really liked diabolical Scratch!
| 0equilibrium0 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
That was pure awesome.
| XDarkAngelOfLoveX chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
dear god this is one of the best stories ever! XD great job!
| ChunkyMunky241 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Very cute! I loved seeing things from Scratch's point of view, and your characterization of Dr. Brief is awesome. He never gets enough appreciation.
| One percent chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
AMAZING! I am glad I came aross this story! I've rarely enjoyed myself that much! it was funny and so smart!
I am really pleased!
| JollyVenturer chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
lovely fic. not very often i read one delving into the characters of Dr. Briefs and Scratch :3
| Dbz VD rox chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Wow great story! I can see that happening! lol
| ndesi62 chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
This was so funny. You really write well, it made a big difference. I especially liked your depiction of Scratch (was that her name in the canon?). My English teacher would be proud.
| sprocketwheel chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Ha! Brilliant! What a great story XD As hilarious as that was, I do feel a bit sorry for Vegeta; carnival music makes me go a little bit crazy as well. I just love the way you write! I had almost given up hope trying to find a decent fic and up popped this one, well-written, clever and very, very funny
*runs to your profile to check out other stories*
| Silver Lady chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Your fanfic was quite a pleasant surprise for me. Its very rare to see someone giving Dr. Briefs his true personality, let alone to make him the main character. I hate so much when people show him abusing of Bulma or acusing Vegeta of having raped her!And I liked the way you portraited Scratch, too, giving her a mischievous, tipically feline mind. (a bit of Garfield touch, perhaps?)
Just one point: the scene where Vegeta teases Bulma at her bedroom was perfectly dispensable. To be honest, I dont like when theyre portraited merely as two jerks that spend all the time yelling at each other and nothing else, and the scene didnt add anything to the story. The scene where Bulma runs into Vegeta after he was beaten by his "private amusement park" would be more than enough to show how they were, uh, getting along.
But, changing the subject, Im truly appreciating your fanfiction. Youre so criative, specially when it comes to characters not so used in DBZ fanfiction. Keep up with the good work!
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I love the in-character and witty humour in this fic. The mental image of Vegeta covered in confetti is priceless!
| Kate7950 chapter 1 . 12/12/2007
hehe loved it :-)
| vegamarie chapter 1 . 12/12/2007
What a fantastic read! You have Vegeta's, Bulma's, and Dr. Briefs's personalities down pat. And I loved that you actually gave Scratch such a mischievous and devious personality and intelligence to boot. I've never read a story like this, but the dynamics between characters worked well together, and I laughed through the whole story. I've always liked Dr. Briefs as a character, just because he's just as quirky as his wife. He doesn't really have a mean streak in him, but I could understand why Scratch would be so irritated over Vegeta's abuse of her beloved master all for the sake of fixing the Gravity Room. The carnival idea was terrific and you have a wonderful talent for giving vivid descriptions and details to everything going on in the plot, something that always seems to be missing in a lot of other stories that I have read. I also have to admire your use of intelligent language, especially coming from Vegeta. He is quite intelligent compared to most characters in the series, and the voice you gave him sounds exactly like Vegeta. Once again, I have to congratulate you on a story well done! I hope that you get more reviews, because it really is terrific and people don't know what they are missing out on if they don't read it or leave a review!
| Argouki chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
Deliciously devious, meh friend...o...ahhahh...o...yeah...that was good..the confetti...ehehee..