|Reviews for Legacy of the Cursed Mask: Michiru's Return|
| Ah Puch chapter 10 . 11/15/2017
This story is fantastic you've done a great job the only problem i have with it is that you have the characters gape a lot i don't think i've ever read a story with so much gaping other than that this story is pretty solid and yeah i remember the episode where Miroku asked Koharu to bare his children it's been years since i watched the show so i don't remember too much but that i definitely remember it also put Miroku on my bad list i never liked how he treated Sango and other women and i hate how it was played for laughs it's not funny it's disgusting
| Consort of Chaos chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
This story...is the story that got me into fan fiction 6 or so years ago and I still love it! Haha, I remember when I dropped a few reviews as a guest "Apocalyptic Gengi", it just brings back all sorts of memories. I keep up with this series to this day. Orionpax, my friend, keep it up. Your style of writing is still one of the best out there in my quite humble opinion.
| WOLFWATCHER12 chapter 10 . 1/10/2016
I would like to see this Naza character that Mr. Kururugi mentioned.
| WOLFWATCHER12 chapter 9 . 7/8/2015
Orion, I have always loved this story.
Can you imagine what it would be like if this were a video game for PlayStation 4?
Also, that part where Michiru and Kaname blew up the Parking Garage was awesome.
And there is something I'd like to see.
A crossover between InuYasha and Spider-Man made by you.
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 12 . 7/6/2013
Wow, I applaud you for this excellent chapter! So, it's continued in another story...well, I should go and read it then! :D Wonderful work, I really loved this story.
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 11 . 7/6/2013
Hahaha, wow way to go for strategy! Again, Kagome annoys me, which hopefully will fade away...anyways, another beautiful chapter! Great work :)
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
Oh poor Kaname! Every time she encounters Sango, Miroku seems to pop up, too. *sigh* And ugh, Kagome and her meddling is getting on my nerves. Even if it is between her friends and having a love triangle going on, she should stay out of it no matter her opinion and let them work it out for themselves. Michiru was so close! Spectacular chapter, I'm looking forward to reading the next one :)
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 9 . 7/6/2013
Yes! He did it! Of course, I'm pretty sure it would've happened sooner or later. Wondrous work! This is so far one of my most favorite chapters
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Curse that stupid Naraku! I remember when he suddenly return in the anime and freaked out, haha. Great chapter, if not a little angsty and incredibly intriguing as well as intense. Some grammar and spelling errors, but those can easily be fixed :)
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 7 . 7/5/2013
Oh no...that doesn't appear to bode very well. But, pushing that aside, marvelous chapter! I feel like I'm reading a real book! I commend you for your impressive writing abilities and skills. Hmm, I spotted a little InuyashaxKaname in there! *wink wink* Haha, great job, I really enjoy reading this fanfic.
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
Wow, very intense! Still, some grammatical errors, but those can be easily fixed. Poor Kaname, she will probably be scarred for life after that. I've never played the game, but I know the jist of what happened after watching most of a walkthrough on YouTube. Fantastic work! :)
| Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 5 . 7/5/2013
Awww! Finally he found a way! I really love this fanfic, it's totally logical for what could have happened after Michiru returned to his own time, and I love the fact that what happened to him also happened to Sango, that was absolutely brilliant! There are some grammatical errors that need to be fixed in order for some sentences to make sense, and a few minor spelling mistakes, but overall wonderful work! I like your sensory descriptions and level of vocabulary too.
| FangOfRetribution chapter 12 . 6/1/2013
About this last chapter
While it's not your longest chapter, you certainly didn't disappoint in putting reason into earlier things. Though bringing up the pendants and the wards, that probably could have transitioned earlier some point when he made them. Other than that though, you've still got me wondering the on again off again with Kagome hating MichiruxSango. Doesn't quite add up for me at all still.
Really enjoyed part one of these series though, and would never have found out about you if it weren't for my own trip down memory lane on looking back at the game. Hope you know you're a really great writer, and that your sequel to this story with the 40 chapters it now has doesn't disappoint in length, as well as quality. After all, it's always "Quality over Quantity".
I'll be sure to follow you on your Deviantart to watch your creations better, and hope that whatever you doing now since your last update to your sequel works out for you, and that you don't give up on this story. Not that hard seeing these chapters happen in a game(Albeit one with changing povs, again not a bad thing).
On the note with Janis..though it would be interesting to see you portray her since unlike the writers for Secret of the Divine Jewel, you actually portray the character's development as well as the writers for Secret of the Cursed Mask(In my opinion anyway), it seems kinda deus ex machina to bring Janis back, what with her having the powers of an actual god and everything. Playing that game with her really didn't leave a good impression on my mind, and I rather not see her again. Course, if you must bring her in, I'm sure you'll be able to pull it off, just hoping you don't go pairing her with Miroku just to get him off of Sango.
| FangOfRetribution chapter 11 . 6/1/2013
About this particular chapter
A chapter left before I move onto the sequel :P Anyway, as the last chapter of part one of this series wait to be unravel before my eyes, I've got to say there's not much to "poke" at or question other than a few things. Was glad to see Co-Op back again after 9 chapters, though the transitioning for it, which though is understandable as experience for Kaname(And some fluff for Michiru and Sango) one can question as to whether or not that could have executed better.
Other than that, I'm still puzzled at Kagome's hesitance to Michiru and Sango's relationship, what with her admitting once she was in the same situation between Inuyasha and Kikyo. Would be pretty cool/helpful to be enlightened on that particular part.
| FangOfRetribution chapter 10 . 6/1/2013
About this particular chapter
Wow, the Kururugi's parents are actually pretty cool _ But you know you've managed to do the impossible right? Don't think I've ever read a fanfic that allowed Miroku and the others to traverse the well until now. Not a bad thing of course, since the development's legit, but you know how people argue about what can and what cannot happen, like the concept as to whether or not Michiru still has his powers at the end of the game, which you've definitely explained well.
Still don't get why Kagome's so apprehensive about Sango and Michiru getting together, which I hope will be explained either by the end of this series, or your sequel to this. All in all though, pretty interesting concept you've managed to put out with the pendants, as well as Miroku's lack of the wind tunnel due to traversing. Other than that though, on my way to reading the next chapter.