Reviews for Can I Have A Kiss?
affectedbyfiction chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
breathtaking :)
remuslupn chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Aww, stupid Potter! He shouldn't have walked away. .
Feathered-Hats chapter 1 . 9/7/2009



sorry... this made me all mushy inside.

i usually don't go for this type of ship...

...but this was so good. x3

thank you. Cx
IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Aww, no Harry don't leave D:

mrscakeakajane chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
ah give them a happy ending, sev can still go after harry please
Ariana Gryffindor chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
haha it's cool! I love your writing very impressive :)

onoudint chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
sad ending? yeah. OOC? yeah. good fic? hell yeah.
BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
it is a sad ending but I can understand why he left just that brief kiss. I mean Snape left him earlier and then avoided him as if he had the plauge so it makes perfect sence for Harry to think Snape doesn't want him

placeholder89 chapter 1 . 5/21/2008

-wipes tear-

that was so sweet, yet so... angsty. I love it.
lele chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
aw that was cute
Kogoro chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Ahh... this is just so sweet, even though it's boy wanting teacher, it's still so very very sweet, and okay, if you think about it, Alan Rickman doesn't look half-bad, now does he? ;D

Great story and an even greater idea it was to divide it into sections like you did. Gives it a sort of fastpaced feel to it with so few and short sentences. Kudos! :)
Rika100 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008

This is so cute and sad at the same time!

Poor Har and Sev!

I love the story though! :)
Lady Gaidin chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
sweet and sad. good job.
0severus-snape0 chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
omg, you should wright a sequel, soo good!
hann chapter 1 . 12/17/2007

I've read a lot of HPSS fanfics, but of all of them, your's was best written!

I envy your writing qualities! :D
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