Reviews for Tempered
TiaRat chapter 14 . 3/12/2008
I just read the whole story straight through...and am still recovering from the intensity. The characters and their reactions seemed really right. They are both very subtle, self -contained characters but this story felt like looking behind the scenes. Also, you did a great job showing Gil being supportive to Sara. It can be very tricky to watch a loved one deal with something traumatic-you wrote Gil as handling it really well; he was emotionally present but was able to step back and let her be as much in control of the situation as possible. Obviously this is fiction but it is still nice to see someone getting that balance right.
contrarymotion chapter 2 . 3/12/2008
I loved greg in that last paragraph! Great story so far.
katyrye chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
hey, its me again. At first I thought.. man... Sara's really blowing this way out of the water... then I read she was in the room. Man... thats got to do a number .
katyrye chapter 7 . 3/6/2008
i do that with Dr. Pepper
katyrye chapter 6 . 3/6/2008
wow! so they're married in this .. ok cool... awesome
katyrye chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
hey, sorry I have not read this.. im going to read this and then restart.. i love your style.. It's awesome .. way to go !
paperback-romance chapter 14 . 2/12/2008
Wow! Awesome story! Thanks for writing!
Binkiekitty chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I always hate masturbation scenes. Men or women. But this was very hot. Good job.
Graymoon74 chapter 10 . 1/25/2008
This chapter had me teary eyed. I'm glad that Grissom is going to her sooner than later.
Graymoon74 chapter 9 . 1/25/2008
Two more weeks. Gah...

Still very good )
Graymoon74 chapter 4 . 1/25/2008
That was great. She should stay...but...oh well. Three weeks! Gah...
Graymoon74 chapter 3 . 1/25/2008
Um...they better...um...yeah )
Graymoon74 chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
She better be there! Damnit!
Graymoon74 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I am so happy to have found this. I love when I find long stories on here! I see you have a continued piece of this also...you freakin' rock.

Wonderful story and 'M' rated.

You have made my day )
Lasrevinu chapter 14 . 1/24/2008
Great ending! Can't wait to read the sequel. :)
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