Reviews for Magical Contracts
AlexiCyn chapter 1 . 4/22
I have to wonder what Fudge's list of victims would look like...

Thanks for this. Short but fun. :D
fantasyinmymind chapter 1 . 3/4
What an interesting idea!
i love fanfiction 16 chapter 1 . 2/14
wizard version of death note
Wind Wolf 1701 chapter 1 . 2/13
Even after reading this story many times I still love it! Thank you, WW.
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 2/10
Dear Kalen:

"[W]izards used magical contracts in every day [sic] business dealings"? How do you derive that datum from the books, exactly?

Dagger-Seishin chapter 1 . 2/5
Can’t blame him there at all. You can forgive minor transgressions but major ones r a lot harder
ZeroQi chapter 1 . 2/4
You're an idiot. Stop writing. You can't seem to use the past tense of your story for more than a few seconds before you're flipping back and forth to present tense. Might seem harsh, but they teach that in grade school. Get a beta, or better yet, EDIT YOUR STORY.
Tygershark chapter 1 . 1/26
Loved this story where Harry finally pulls his head out and starts to use it for more than something to keep his hat on. I found it to be believable, after all, Hermoine successfully cast the charm on Cormac McLaggan in the fifth year. It's not unreasonable to think that after Harry hears Moody talk about the charm to figure out how to cast it. We know he's a powerful wizard. I love to see Harry engage in rational thinking.
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 1/17
GO HARRY! Add more please!
Zela Night chapter 1 . 1/8
You made Harry kinda dark, I like it
BMS chapter 1 . 1/1
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2017
How would Harry be vulnerable to the contracts? He never made one for himself.
GoldenGryphon chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
Thank you for writing this. There is just so much YES! with your story and Author's Note ... it can be hard to think of anything to say.
Thank you for posting this in a public forum for random people to read.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
Interesting story. Film Severus is sort of redeemed, but book severus is awful in that he has no problem with a baby or the baby's father being killed as long as the woman he loves, who doesn't love him, is left alive. i always think the other characters must find harry's admiration of severus weird, especially hermione who would remember him making fun of her appearance when she as a child.
goku90504 chapter 1 . 8/21/2017
to play devils advocate here who says that someone being confunded automatically means the simple confundus charm after all saying someone was shot doesn't mean much on it's own were they shot with a nerf gun? a hand gun? a rifle? a tank gun firing shells as big as their heads? confunded could be a generic term in the magical world for being affected by any spell whose effect is to confuse someone of which the standard school version could be like being shot by a nerf gun or hand gun and what was used on the goblet was more the equivilant of the tank gun with shells bigger than a persons head

also it could be that the goblet being so powerful is also part of why it worked

that's assuming dumbledor wasn't just lying to begin with

also it might very well have been harrys signature put in the goblet if barty tore his name off the top of one of his defense assignments

that said despite all of the above i found your story amusing but it also touches tangentially on one of my major pet peeves about a lot of harry potter fanfiction is that so few people think about what it really means for magic to be real and as powerful and as easy to do as it is in harry potter

for one anyone who graduates hogwarts and is comfortable in the muggle world there is no reason for them to be poor ... one example is the reparo charm can easily be used to make money in the muggle world even if you put restrictions on how the spell works it would still make making money in the muggle world easy with a little creativity and thats just one spell dozens of others with a bit of creativity could also be used to make money in the muggle world

another is why does the magical worlds economy have to resemble the muggle one in any way shape or form? for one thing food might very well be basically free in the wizarding world for any number of reasons ... even with the rule of you can't conjure food or transfigure food from non food and even if you include an unspoken food can't be simply duplicated nothing prevents you at the very least enchanting farming equipment to automate a large farm to produce food with virtually no ongoing man power ... also what about perhaps they can accelerate a crops growth perhaps with simple spells or perhaps with rituals

yet another is so many assume that the ratio of the school age portion of the population to total population is the same as in the muggle world despite 1. magicals live longer than non magicals (consider that dumbledor is over 100 and still working and the lady who gave him his owl tests was still working when harry took his test which means she's at least older than dumbledor by a few years at least and is still working and 2. that ratios isn't constant in the real world due to many factors and 3. that school is only 11 - 17 in the magical world ... maybe 11-18 where in the real world school starts at about 5 to 7 and goes on to college

once again i found the story amusing but does assume a lot to be both literal and true and taken at face value
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