|Reviews for Bring Me Down|
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/23
it's a cute story.
there were quite a few inconsistencies, ie. bella driving then walking then driving then walking when she didn't have a car or when she snuck up on the vampires to overhear them talking, etc etc...
there were parts to the story i disagreed with,
there were parts to the story i wished bella did things differently,
overall, it was an entertaining story for the younger crowd.
| Sunshine011 chapter 22 . 2/24/2014
Sorry I was to lazy to log in... anywho great chapter! I know I'm a little late but I don't care I loved your story!
| crazycats7 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Why does Bella have to be overweight. The story would be better if she was skinny. Less fat and meat so to speak. She would hurt more easily by abuse
| Guest chapter 22 . 12/28/2013
Beautiful story very beautiful ending i could read it all over again actually i am too
| Motherof8 chapter 14 . 12/9/2013
Yes, Edward is right, he deserves it
| Motherof8 chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
Alice is great
| Motherof8 chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
Yea, he is a monster
| Casey-Pup chapter 22 . 8/12/2013
I just recently started reading FanFics so im way late on reviewing but i still do. I adore this story it was well written, one of the best parts were the little song lyric clips at thr bottom of the chapters. They all fit so perfectly. Im getting ready to look up more of the author's post. Thanks for posting this one. The Author is truely talented.
| Motherof8 chapter 22 . 5/14/2013
Great story. Thanks for writing it
| Motherof8 chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
Can't wait to see Charlie get his
| Motherof8 chapter 8 . 5/13/2013
Really don't like this edward
| lorna.anderson.378 chapter 22 . 4/8/2013
You should a next chapter of them getting married the last chapter was you left it like hanging but its fine id you don't want to do another chapter I was just concidering or if that's how you spell it
| Harlequin of Hericide chapter 22 . 8/25/2012
-clap clap clap clap-
| Harlequin of Hericide chapter 21 . 8/25/2012
I CAN ONLY IMAGINE BEER GUT CHARLIE FIGHTING LOL
| twivampsalvatore chapter 22 . 8/11/2012