|Reviews for Atonement|
| T chapter 16 . 6/16
I think this was very OOC, and very patronising towards Draco. Hermione Granger is not a bumbling, compliant, timid little girl who will fumble and listen to her captor and do as he says. She's fierce, deadly and sharp as a whip, and there is no way she would've allowed Draco to boss her around the way she did. In fact, she probably would've already devised a plan to escape Malfoy Manor by Day 3. It feels like Draco's made out to be the typical celebrated hero who sacrificed everything and who saved everybody, and that nobody could possibly have made it out alive. And he betrayed Harry. He actually BETRAYED Harry. There is no way Ginny would've forgiven him. Knowing her temper, she would've hexed his balls off to Uranus.
I liked the story and the idea, but there was a huge lack of proper characterisation. None of it seemed relatable or real.
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/18
Hopefully Voldemort will kill the lying manipulative bastard.
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/17
So Hermine has a chance to Aveda Malfoy and, because she's a spineless moron, she doesn't. Stockholm Syndrome isn't sexy, dumbass.
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/17
And...this is "romantic"? Really? I think you need mental help.
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/17
Awwww, sexual assault is SO ROMANTIC!111!
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/17
See? Bullying abuse so SOOOO ROMANTIC! This is disgusting. I hope Hermione kills him.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/17
Awww, aren't emotional, mental, and physical abuse so SEXXXXXYYY!111! Gullible writers and readers apparently are conned into believing it is.
| kenihun chapter 16 . 3/22
Thank you for sharing this to us, readers.
I enjoy every moment of it, though I've seen some similarities to your plot in these days Dramione fics :)
But I love your original one.
Thank you once again
| kenihun chapter 2 . 3/22
Isn't it supposed to be Stupefy? Rather than Stupify?
Anyway, I like it already! :D
| ladybear92 chapter 16 . 3/10
This is so sweet,
Short yet heart warming.
| uncoconut chapter 16 . 2/28
Damn. I was hoping he'd be dead but I guess not. Im gonna be straight forward. Draco is still a sack of shit no matter his explanation. Hermione seems to have no common sense and his subtle methods of brainwashing did not go unnoticed by me.
Give as little information as possible show as little of the outside world as possible Stockholm Hermione
Also, giving gifts to the hostage can make them more compliant.
The more you know.
| Rika Azumi Sakura Yukihara chapter 16 . 2/20
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful, I love this, it's pure genius!
| houdiniboom chapter 16 . 1/28
Okay so, this was really really beautiful. I'm so glad I read it. I truly enjoyed it. Wish it to be a little longer but... just the way it is, it's lovely. Thank you.
| daswhoiam chapter 16 . 1/25
I found your story on Tumblr... Wow what a ride. So well written. You really captured the gamut of emotions. Thank you for sharing this. :)
| Mesa Indrani chapter 16 . 1/4