Reviews for Atonement
Anonymous Dramione chapter 11 . 2/15/2014
i hate you. i really do.
Keite chapter 16 . 2/11/2014
I very much liked the story, you are a very talented writer. However I have some trouble believing that Hermione could just get over the fact (part of some minor guilt) that he betrayed her and her friends even if he feels remorse. Of course he saved her friends afterwards but she didn't know that at the time.
And the feminist in me (something that I feel Hermione and Ginny are as well) has some major problems with the fact that the man go off fighting will the women stay safely behind.
But a part of that I really enjoyed reading this and I will definitely check out your other stories.

ps: Sorry for any grammar or other mistakes, as you can probably tell English is not my first language.
lilblueangel1223 chapter 16 . 2/11/2014
I read this fanfiction a long time ago, and happened to stumble upon it again and reread it without a knowledge of what happened. I LOVED it! Such a great job at writing Hermione and Draco's emotions towards one another. Absolutely brilliant!
sullivan89 chapter 16 . 1/18/2014
I have read so many stories on here a lot are great some are a disappointment but this story way hands down AMAZING! You are a brilliant writer and i think im in love with you. This story made me ball my eyes out about 20 times and I'm not much of a crier...I felt everything Hermione felt and when she was shaking i couldn't control the tremors that rocked through me. I wish the story didn't have an ending and just went on forever. Do you have any more brilliant stories with Draco in this type of character where he is harsh and cruel but inside loves her? If you have a book published I need to know what you call it so I can buy a dozen copies. I would love you to write one using your own characters and setting but like this one, with the cruelty and harshness of a man who secretly loves the one he torments. Please never stop writing in my opinion you are a much better writer then JK Rowling or EL James and many others whose material I've read. Thank you for this story! -Aleigh
Sophie chapter 11 . 12/27/2013
You have no idea how much I cried this chapter! I love love love Dramione! But whenever Ron is mentioned I ball! Great chapter can't wait to read the rest!
bugaboo107 chapter 16 . 12/22/2013
Beautiful and the end words were perfect. Very emotional.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/30/2013
Absolutely perfect ending. Amazing story! Ceied with tears of joy :')
dobbylovessocks chapter 16 . 11/15/2013
One of the best fanfics I've read wish you would add more chapters though!
anievul chapter 16 . 10/30/2013
That was tremendously written and a thoroughly enjoyable read; made even more so by the brilliant ship that it supports (May Dramione Reign Eternal). However, the progression from their previous state of utter hatred to passionate lovers would have been better said if the background had been expanded upon to greater proportions. Also, I feel that you should have let the impact of Draco’s death sink into the audience for a little bit longer (just for the feels…to rip us apart and put us back together) before making him pop up. The last chapter in general was a bit too fluffy for the context of the story especially the final reunion scene as well as the appearance of Draco a perfectly dashing, handsome prince – like character. I would have personally preferred a bloody, bruised, beaten up Draco who stumbles along victorious. But in terms of overall comparison, brilliant – a unique take on the plot that I attribute mainly to the fact that it was a multi – chaptered fic.
Elluzions chapter 16 . 10/15/2013
Loved this story! I usually don't go for dark fics, but something about your first chapter really drew me in. The "love" scene was extremely passionate and I teared up when I thought that Draco died. Your writing was very powerful and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. :)
Dramione13 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
LOVED your fanfic! From the heart breaking beginning to the resulting end, ugh! I LOVED it! Please write more soon! :)
darrencrisscrosschrist chapter 16 . 9/23/2013
I LOVED it! The ending made me cry and the entire development of the story and execution was just beautiful! The only thing I didn't love about this story however is how weak Hermione's character was, Hermione can kick butt as we all know and although I do love the way this story played out I would've loved it more if she was more strong in that sense (sorry sorry sorry I still love this story)
whoisthed chapter 14 . 9/6/2013
the end of this chapter, that goodbye, scarred me forever. seriously. :(( so very beautiful.
whoisthed chapter 13 . 9/6/2013
UGH. i really love this fic, I've read it a lot, and this is one of my favorite parts, where Draco's steel, cold demeanor kind of falters and then you kind of get a glimpse of how insecure and imperfect and so very utterly human he is D:

"I'm never going to be enough, am I?" I MEAN OUCH, REALLY, I FEEL FOR HIM.

I also like it that Hermione really loved Ron, and how she couldn't just let him go and had to go through an entire process to do so.

tldr; i love this fic i love you i love draco i love hermione
Guest chapter 16 . 8/21/2013
LOVED IT
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