Reviews for Only Yours
mintgil chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
that was on strange story, but, i liked it ...
left on the altar chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Do I ever love your imagery! The depth of detail and the tantalizing descriptions dovetail perfectly in the canon motivations and proceeding dialogue.

Hate to admit that I'm practically slathering by the end while my knees are jelly, good thing I'm sitting down. Where's a vampire when you need him!
Itaque chapter 3 . 8/14/2008
I loved this! Even though it was imagined, it could have been a deleted scene from the book. I enjoyed hearing how they both thought they knew what the other was thinking. Now whenever I read Eclipse I will read this story in between!
KxTx chapter 3 . 8/13/2008
that was very good. well written, etc. bravo.
Sakiru Yume chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
I really like the story, especially this chapter. Are you going to write more?
parkerbaby chapter 3 . 5/29/2008
Once again I am amazed at how accuratly you capture Edward's and Bella's emotions. I truly enjoy reading your work. Definitely need to keep writing!
bitten-sln chapter 3 . 4/23/2008
keep writing...i love the way he distracts her...
bitten-sln chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
i love it...most M fanfics are out of character...keep writing
NoMoreThanUsual chapter 3 . 4/5/2008
That was terrific! You write Edward, especially, so well. I really loved your fluff!
nothingleft chapter 3 . 4/3/2008
Fantastic writing, well done. ;P
averysubtlegift chapter 3 . 3/21/2008
Nicely done. I liked the idea of Bella giving voice to a lot of her thoughts on the two of them getting married. This is a point in the books that really bothers me though. There is a lot about Bella in the Twilight series that I don't like - and this is a biggie. It seems to me - that although Edward often can't see past his own beliefs (as we've already discussed) he does make a lot of compromises and concessions for Bella. In the grand scheme of things, for Bella to agree to get married is so miniscule - and yet she agonizes over it. I know some might argue that it has to do with todays "norms" or her upbringing with parents that married too young - but it means so much to Edward - and I always am a bit irked that she can't just do it for him - and be happy about it - without all the drama.

Sorry for the rant - but it does make me annoyed. I liked the fact that you covered her fear over what people would think - and the implications of the two of them getting married and the rumors that might ensue. I also liked that you had her face the fact that there aren't any rules or norms for a vampire/human relationship - so perhaps it's not as big deal as she initially thinks. You mentioned something about writing a lot of Edward - and fearing you were losing Bella's voice - but I don't think you are at all. You write Edward with a lot more insight, depth and maturity - and your Bella is much more of a girl - not your typical teenager by any means - but not tempered by a century of life experience either.

Bravo, you know I always love what you write! ;P
Miranda River chapter 3 . 3/16/2008
Wow...this is incredibly well written. I do hope you keep this up.
blackolives10 chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
I'm sad there's only one chapter left! I am really enjoying this story. The word choice is simply amazing.
just-your-average-kid chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
You are an unbelievably talented writer...
Artemis Rampant chapter 2 . 3/7/2008
Oh my god...you're so good with this relationship. This sort of interaction is exactly what the wonderful Ms. Meyer is trying to portray. Plus, seeing Edward's point of view is wonderful, just to be reassured how much he really obsesses over her, that it's not just Bella and the indulgent vampire. They are so cute. *sighs*
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