Reviews for Antithesis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I could say it unnecessary dark... But, well, let's be honest, canon gives us enough of the tools for something exactly like that to happen. Seriously, legal love potions? No mandatory regular testing for love potions and memory charms? No truth-compelling testing whether you've used those before any wedding? That's just inviting trouble in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that's dark. Won't the kids be effected because of the love potion? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m sure I read this a loooong time ago and so I feel like it’s been edited and is a lot crisper in raw emotions. The shock and horror to be in such a situation. Great job with Harry’s struggle to find his true self deep inside but can you imagine the broken man he would be after all this finally hits him, his family and friends. What a wreck his life and his sense of self would have to deal with! Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good! I’ve never liked that they ended up together. Harry and Hermione might have been better with how much they’ve been through together.️ |
![]() ![]() WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!? I LOVE GINNY! WHY DID YOU RUIN HER?! But nicely done, really, though, nicely done. |
![]() ![]() there is a huge plot hole here who gave harry potions when he hunted horcruxes? Secret conspiracy with Hermione? AND? Because Rowling wrote that Harry missed her at that time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you would of continued this so we see the aftermath |
![]() ![]() ![]() JK Rowling is that you? LOL it has to be who else could hit Ginny's character so well.. it's also quite impressive that you had to hit with your come pick her up instead of I feel most authors would have had an auror come pick her up... I don't think most people know the difference. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow! that should be canon! |
![]() ![]() ...and? |
![]() ![]() I do wish this had happened instead of Rowling's stupid ending! |
![]() ![]() Dark and unpleasant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Thank you for this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean this makes more sense then that gross canon pairing I mean seriously He looks just like he's dad and decides to date a girl who looks similar to he's mom it's like he's remaking history I never liked Ending pairings HarryGin and MioneRon it's ridiculous so good job this makes much more sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() Powerful. Obsession, fanatical obsession. Liked how you gradually did the reveal of her crimes through the story. |