Reviews for The Submission of Haruhi Fujioka
Kichou chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
Great chapter. I love it. Very in character (to me that is). Update please.
Natural Born Charmer chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
This is getting so good! Once again, I love your writing style, so simple and to the point. Please update soon!
Cole A chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
i find it a bit unromantic that he fearlessly admitted he's only proposing to her just because his father asked him to.. but that last line of his is soo moe.. "my wife" ooh.
Lynnzy chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
nice story. cant wait for the next chappie
Lakoma chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
It's cute. I like the deal that Kyouya and Haruhi made, and I'm looking forward to them actually falling in love and becoming engaged for real. I do hope that's part of your plan because I love this pairing. They make the best couple.
Kichou chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Nice story. I like it. Update please.
Teagarden chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Wow. Super interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
FLiPguRL219 chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Great start!

I like that Yoshio Ootori is portrayed as a nice person this time. And, of course, KyouyaxHaruhi pairing is just awesome!
Natural Born Charmer chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
This is a very interesting story and I like you writing style.

Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter.
anelyna chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
this is cool! i wanna keep reading..i don't normally read uncompleted stories so please update! but i love ur beginning of ur story! its great!
JenovaJuice97 chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
this looks interesting and i hope you update soon!
Cole A chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
interesting that you went very straight to the issue of how and why would ohtori yoshio would want haruhi as kyouya's bride.
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