Reviews for Angels fall first
darysha chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
Very good... I liked it.
ProfoundBond821 chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
I loved the story! I just want to point out one mistake.

"her lips so read that they resembled his gentle roses"

Just make sure you change the "read".

Great story, though!
VHunter07 chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
My that was lovely...thanks so much for sharing your immense talents with us!