|Reviews for The First to Die|
| NoaFuuma chapter 3 . 12/20/2007
oh holy crap! i'm getting scared! mn! i really don't have to read this kind of shit! i'm to naïve for this!
| NoaFuuma chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
wow! this sounds cool!
| dragonlady222 chapter 9 . 12/18/2007
Good ending. Great story.
| 4everbebe chapter 9 . 12/17/2007
please update soon thank you
| Tentaculiferous chapter 9 . 12/17/2007
*wails* I can't believe its over! Oh well, great job! You update really fast Can't wait for your next story, au revoir
| dragonlady222 chapter 8 . 12/16/2007
Good chapter. I'm glad they are going to get involved. It will be for the best to end this quickly.
| Tentaculiferous chapter 7 . 12/16/2007
An ice pick! Excellent! Poor Weevil, Lord, please keep him from the grasp of plot-driven authors!
And it know occurs to me that I've killed Weevil in 2 of my 3 YGO stories o_0
| dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 12/16/2007
Good chapter. Too bad Weevil was so stupid.
| dragonlady222 chapter 6 . 12/15/2007
Good chapter. I never thought about a son for Bandit Keith. Good twist.
| dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 12/15/2007
Good chapter. Poor man, too bad they were to late.
| Tentaculiferous chapter 5 . 12/15/2007
So is the murderer... Yugi! jking. Hey, does Japan have an FBI type organization?
| 4everbebe chapter 4 . 12/15/2007
omg i love and please update soon
| Tentaculiferous chapter 4 . 12/15/2007
Well you've got me hooked _ is the murderer an OC? I guess Amelda/Alister is pretty mad at Kaiba, but I don't know if he'd do it.
Good job developing (even though he's dead) I think he would be something like a mechanic. Skilled, hardworking, but probably not with a college education with the way Joey acts _ It tells about him in the manga but not really in the anime.
| dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 12/15/2007
Good chapter. So the murderer is Duke Devlin? I thought it might be Bandit Keith but he's not that smart.
| dragonlady222 chapter 3 . 12/14/2007
Good chapter. I hope they can stop him.