|Reviews for Blue Monday|
| velvetsprite chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
This is so honest,
so Hyde and Jackie
that it makes me want to cry.
I love it and despise it,
if you know what I mean.
Love it, because it stays
true to the characters,
but hate it, because of the
reality of their relationship.
Haha, it kind of gave me closure
with their awful relationship
during season 8. Damn writers!
| verdebel chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
This was great, I loved it. And I love jackie and hyde as well.
| Schick Merchandise chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
He fascinates me as well. You can't leave it like this. Gez. ~_~
| kezztip chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
This was one of your best one-shots. There is this total ring of inevitability about the whole thing - like of course, one day Hyde would look back on what he's done and what he has lost and and have some kind of break down or break through - I think there are elements of both in your story. I loved the lines:-
“But I love you.” Hyde tells her, gripping her arms to make her stay.
“Oh, I know that, Steven, but that doesn’t change anything, don’t you see?”
They are the saddest words. It is the toughest hurdle we fanfic authors have to jump when it comes to writing post season 8 - how could Jackie ever get past what Hyde did, even if she accepted that they love each other? It is something I am going to have to wrestle with in my own story as well.
Anyhow, well done and thank you. Even though it is sad, there is something very satisfying about a lovesick and miserable Hyde.
| SkittlezLvr79 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
This was seriously a brilliantly angsty piece of work. His drunken admission did come too late but it makes you wonder what would have happened had it come a few weeks or months earlier which is so bittersweet. Fabulous job as always!
| MinaSeraphina chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
I really loved it I just wish I could get some closure out of that ;) lol
| JoyfulHeartEO chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
that was so sad. but in a good way.
| fastforwarddd chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Wow that was great.
Very angsty, but again, it made me feel haha so it might have been great!
Loved it, I hope you write more to come!