|Reviews for Play Crack the Sky|
| great gospel chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
This piece was beautifully rendered, and you certainly did Aerith justice. You had a great grasp on her character and her inner struggles. My favourite part was this: "Away from her and further, deeper into his destiny that she was realizing, deep within her, was fated to not be a part of her own. No matter how much she wishes it." It was just so melancholy and so honest - how she just knows that their time won't last, whether it's just a foreboding or the voices trying to tell her something. You handled her grief and trying to move on very organically, as well. All in all, you captured Aerith perfectly. Well done.
| Lucite chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
;_; this is really beautiful! I love how you described Aerith and characterized her so well!
| Miss Perspicacious chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
i love this fic! great job! i liked the way you handled their characters. aerith's personality was really in this one.
but, i noticed you weren't quite consistent with your tenses and that there were some typos. yet even so, its a job well done!
oh! could please explain something for me? pretty please?
“There was no girl in Costa del Sol, was there?”
“Of course not. Unless you had been willing to move there with me.”
“Hmm... I knew it.”
aerith was talking to zack right? so what did aerith mean by "hmm.. i knew it"...? could you please clear this up for me? a reply would be very, very, very much appreciated! thanks!
| xoRaining Diamondsox chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Fantastic. Awesome Aerith's POV. Captured everything about her life beautifully.
I'd write more, but I'm dead tired... one thing though... the final scene... where was that from? Or did you make it up? Either way, it was a great way to end such a tragic biography on a light note. I'm glad they're happy together.
| GeoMill chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
I don't understand how good stories get so little reviews. You interpreted Aerith's feeling and thoughts so well. You didn't just ditch her attitude towards Cloud, you developed them and made them much more interesting. I always wondered how Zack's and Aerith's would be like. It's obivously not like it's depicted in Maiden Who Travels the Planet, because she was considerably OOC in that (not to mention is not even canon). I wonder if they will EVER reveale how they united (I have my daughts, though).
Lovely story. The last three dialogues made me smile : )
| AngolMoaChan chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Aw. That last part made me squeal. XD
I really *really* like your writing style. It's very smooth, and there's a lot of emotion behind every word, but not so much that the reader drowns in it, you know?
The "you'll be alright" from advent children was a nice touch too. (I started bawling the second it showed Zack and her together at the end. It killed me. XD *is shot*)
And bah. Only seven reviews? *scoffs* Shame on those fans who haven't reviewed this yet. :3
(end rant XD)
| XxXRibbinzXnXChainzXxX chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
I read this story allong time ago, but this one is mostly the reason I now LOVE the ZackxAerith pairing...They really are so perfect for eachother, arent they? I just now got to reviewing it...
| Pied Flycatcher chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
That's so sweet. Just a really really lovely portrayal of their relationship. The writing is very good, except there was one thing that kept distracting me all the way through: the tense. It keeps switching between past and present, which is confusing.
| A Gentle Illusion chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
This was beautiful. Completely correct and great and amazing in every way. I loved it how, after each break, you showed that Zack and Aerith knew more about each other just by details of how she perceived him. How, after the break when Zack falls through the roof, you show that they've talked more and gotten to know each other much better just by having Aerith relate Zack's abilities to the fact that he's in SOLDIER.
I think, however, that my favorite factor in this piece was that they only had to hold hands to show that they cared about each other.
| Summoner Luna chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I don't know if this text box will allow me to say all the wonderful things I want to about this story!
First off, the title/song you picked...I love Brand New, and have actually had that title saved for one of my own stories, I just haven't found the right one yet to pair it with...but now, I know I shall never do it justice compared to you!
And then...your character relationships...they are just everything I picture things to be...I love confused, imperfect Aerith, and I really love the depth that you have given her, and especially her time with Zack...it just really brings out how sad and beautiful their time together was. And I love any writer who acknowledges a friendship between Aerith and Tifa, and, being the complete Tifa fangirl that I am, I think you also did an incredibly adept job at capturing her character even in the few times she was mentioned. Aerith and Cloud, as well...that triangle (AxCxZ) is so difficult for writers to actually understand, I think, since it wasn't a true triangle so much as a bunch of convoluted emotions, and you have very skillfully avoided the trap of turning it into more drama than it actually was.
All in all, just...really, really brilliant. I could go on and on...wonderful work!
| Ardwynna Morrigu chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
That was beautiful! Such a contemplative look at one girl's strange life and the ones she shared it with. The 'courtship' parts are adorable, but so sad for what we know is coming. I like the way you portray her dealing with her grief and uncertainty. Think of him happy, it will do. So generous and kind, the best approach to take with all that Not Knowing. The end really wraps it all up so sweetly. Lovely!
| animevideogame freak chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
i liked it very good
| flawinthemechanics chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
A picture of the prettiest girl in Nibelheim to add to my collection, just so I can prove to you that no other girl compares to you.”
AWW! how cute I really loved this! Especially the interaction between Aeirs and Zacky poo lolz! I love those two :] Great jobbie