Reviews for I Love You, Ucchan
xThomas2 chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
Poor story telling, could use some work
Jenkinst chapter 7 . 5/31/2014
Please update this story is really good
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
This story is really good if you don't want to write the rest in full could you put up a chapter that narrates what will happen in the rest of the story because I want to know the end
Shadowmancer42 chapter 7 . 7/11/2012
I really wish that you would continue this story. It is very good.
yuchi1994 chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
no it's finished!
feernando chapter 7 . 1/8/2011
i really liked i hope that you can finish the story
feernando chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
i like you story is really good
Captain Zeug chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
What's up with naru foxxx? What an idiot.

I'm sorry to say that, while this is a relatively good story, you lost my interest at chapter 3.

Your writing skill is fine, though adding 'parts' to each chapter was a, for the most part, pointless move. The story also seems a bit rushed. I understand that, since this takes place mid-manga, we know how it goes, but you need to add more description and organize your paragraphs and lines better.

Don't get me wrong though, it's good. It just leaves a lot to be desired.
the naru foxxx chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Pleas up date soon we want

Moor moor moor moor moor

Moor moor moor moor moor

Moor moor moor moor moor

Moor moor moor moor moor

Moor moor moor moor moor

Moor moor moor moor moor

I love this ship and yur story
the naru foxxx chapter 2 . 7/21/2010
Pleas up date soon
the naru foxxx chapter 3 . 7/21/2010
Pleas Up date soon
the naru foxxx chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
We want moor soon
the naru foxxx chapter 5 . 7/21/2010
We want moor
the naru foxxx chapter 6 . 7/21/2010
We want moor
the naru foxxx chapter 7 . 7/21/2010
We want moore I love this story
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