Reviews for Not So Straight
mazotori chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
awww thats so cute~
Kaoru Gal chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
So sweet and adorable and afjaf

:D this just made me happy

Angel of Lavender chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
"the review button is your friend" thats the best 'please review' I have seen XD

lovely story.

The story doesn't say complete...but it seems finished. is it done?
Parallel Construction chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
I agree with the anonymous reviewer.

A Reviewer chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
This is flawless.

This deserves more reviews.

This is a masterpiece.

The story flowed naturally, realistically. The fluff didn't explode in the reader's face, and there wasn't even a kiss (which makes this even more realistic)! You do NOT know how long I've been looking for a story like this, and I feel like my life is complete after coming across this story. Ever since 2003, I've been trying to find this kind of story. And I finally found it!

It's written quite eloquently. Not over the top but not too simplistic either. Impecable choice of words.

You're a phenomenal human being, serenity denied. Granted, I'm you're number one fan; which is why I'm going to create a penname so I can review you more formally.

Continue writing. Your stories make me so happy; a happiness that is beyond comprehension. Seriously.

Take care and write more!
Lonely Moon chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
WAFF. That was really cute.
randomcrimes chapter 1 . 2/7/2008

Okay, well, I pretty much love everything you write, but that's not the point.

p.s. i miss your riku. ;-;
renAku chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
i really like this
StarlingStorm chapter 1 . 12/27/2007


Wish u made it a story! Its that good!
Abbandon chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Amazing, Serenity, once again. Another amazing fic.
Smoking Panda chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Very cute...
Kalithekat chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
omg that was so adorable ;u;! I loved the ending with the "no" part XD. e this was just too great :D. Great job
Cassie-san chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
Aww, that was really cute!

I liked it very much.

You are very talented.

I fave now.
Katraa chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
this made me happy, hun :'D it was lovely. AMAZING, as usual *envy envy*


Wicked Spells chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
This is such a cute story. I can't wait to read more. I hope you continue it and I can't wait till the next chapter.
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