Reviews for Waitressing
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
I don't see that one fucked up experience making bella go into "survivor mode" every time she gets touched. Why must you take it to the absolute fucking extreme? It makes for a shitty read.
BriseisRose chapter 16 . 12/19/2015
Hey there. Just wondering if you're still working on these stories? I'm not even I'm the Twilight fandom anymore, but I still remember this story! I loved the storyline. I'd love to see it finished!
amelinasa chapter 16 . 8/18/2014
Great fiction! I love your version of Bella, I think I prefer yours than the original one! I hope you'll update soon!
XhowtosavealifeX chapter 2 . 2/25/2014
Loved Carlisle's perspective on the situation!
XhowtosavealifeX chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Wow, just wow. Your writing has improved so much. I loved this story before. Now I think it's one of my favorites. I can't wait to read the other revised chapters! Keep up the amazing job!
SelenaQuintanillaLOVER chapter 15 . 2/1/2013
love it and how you didn't rush the relationship with Bella and Edward :) and I was wondering if you are ever gonna update ?
Frannie-pants chapter 15 . 12/5/2012
I absolutely love this story! Edward is witty and Bella is smart. It's a very refreshing combination! I know it's been quite a while since you have updated this story, but I sincerely hope that you do. :)
cookieraider3 chapter 15 . 2/25/2012
I am tempted to give you 97 more reviews. This really is an awesome story.
Ana chapter 15 . 8/5/2011
Loven your story sooo much! Hope uypu update soon! :) okay thats all
Ira Bell chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
I love this story I wish there was more
akadabra-kaching chapter 15 . 6/10/2011
perhaps phil would be coming here..?

or bella's parents coincidentally live in the same town, somehow i just dont quite believe they're dead yet since there was nothing proven to bella., are they dead?

or is that something you can't tell me as the author of this story?

or, they've turned into vampires.

akadabra-kaching chapter 13 . 6/10/2011


how sweet!

if only twilight edward was as carefree as your edward.

i'd like the twilight series so much better.
Needlessly Complicated chapter 15 . 5/29/2011
Update please I always hate when Edward doesn't want to change her
laceyndom chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
Interesting story
vamp.ladybug chapter 15 . 1/29/2011
I think the chapter flowed wonderfully but when is the next chapter coming?

Please update soon!

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