Reviews for Kim Possible: Christmas Among Friends
arandomshipper chapter 3 . 8/10/2016
Cool story, bro. Oh, but not sarcastically. Really, a cool story. No pun intended (with the December theme). It was just a hair existential for my taste, and definitely had more of an adult feel than the show does, but I'm good with that. I think you captured Dementor's 'voice' pretty well, which is no easy task. Most writers can properly exhibit the main characters, it's the development of the side characters and villains that separates the best from the rest, IMHO.
hadago77 chapter 3 . 10/18/2015
This was an excellent, well-written piece of Kim Possible fiction. Loved it.
Disney Syndulla chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
ok...didnt really understand it, but still. pretty good!
Kim fan chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
fedorasarecool chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I like the way you used the Christmas music as a contrast to the explosions and fighting, and the annual Christmas truce idea works very well. Everything always happens at Christmas! (The Doctor has it worse, he usually has an alien army about to destroy the planet, or a space ship crashing into London or something)
OtisSpofford chapter 3 . 4/27/2010
I like this story. First off, it’s very well written, especially if this is your first attempt of any type of fiction. Also well constructed. Good characters (one of the fun things about writing into the future of the series is the virtually limitless directions they can take) and also simply an entertaining story. I’ll for sure be reading more of your work.
kp83 chapter 3 . 5/2/2009
This is an awesome story! Action, Drama, Comedy, Romance mixed together always make for a good story. I loved how Kim and Ron interacted with each other in this story. It was so sweet. They are certainly going to have their hands full with MMP twins! Thanks for giving us such an entertaining story!
Sircot chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
Hug-transportation? Odd, but awesome. I liked the whole scared Dementor thing too. You had a mild inconsistency with the date, but then again, it didn't matter to the story. It sounds like you have experience dealing with the scary pregnant woman thing ;). Great story. You can definitely work solo.
tanithlipsky chapter 3 . 12/23/2008
wonderful fanfic. suits the season.

Merry christmas to you!
Aero Tendo chapter 3 . 8/9/2008
Now THIS was a totally awesome story, worthy of a double Boo-yah!

I was so moved by it, that it brought me to tears. :) Not kidding!

The use of the Christmas music (My fav time of the year) and the clever use of the clock in chapter 2, combined with that mystical touch was just great. This story EASILY belongs in my favorites section and I am certain that I'll read it again when Christmas rolls around. The views of both Kim and Ron were very nicely done and the way you had Kim react to Ron being blasted was just totally heart-touching and cool! :)

I want to add this, if Niquest doesn't like Kim and Ron being stuck with MMP powered twins. I sure hope he doesn't read my "All Grown Up" stories because I've stuck the couple with not 1 pair of twins but SIX children, all of whom are twins! ;)

Keep up the great work!
Sentinel103 chapter 3 . 8/2/2008
Mr. Bear, I guess I'd better review this after reading it for about the 10th time. (sorry thought I'd already done it and would get kicked off). The high point is Kimmie is PG with twins MMP ninja twins at that. Oi what a problem. Now Ron is going to he MMP powered PG wife too. It jut keeps getting better for the Ron man. Good thing he can cook. Seriously though, Ron has the beginnings of his family, and he has the tools to protect them and keep them safe from harm. I expect Kim to be a good mommie and Ron to be a good daddie. Yep, the beginnings of a clan of heros.


Larry (Sentinel 103)
Michael Howard chapter 3 . 4/29/2008
Very nice blend of humor, action, and sentiment in the conclusion to your first, hopefully not last, KP fan fic. I'd be interested in seeing more like this.
Michael Howard chapter 2 . 4/29/2008
Interesting take on the intermmitent nature of the MMP, and very true to Ron's character. I don't look at other people's reviews until I send in my own, but I hope that no one takes you to task for your inclusive representation of religion. I myself think you handled that hot button issue very well.
Michael Howard chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Nice begining to this story. The way you blend the scene and the song lyrics together is quite original, I think, and certainly effective.

Good work here!
kaiokken chapter 3 . 3/6/2008
Well done man... loved this story. Hope you write some more soon...
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