Reviews for Divinity
Hermysnap chapter 21 . 11/13
Vivement la suite
Jadarainbow chapter 21 . 8/12
I know it's a long shot but I hope you'll pick up writing this story again. I've enjoyed it thus far and hope to continue reading it in the future
planthealerrep chapter 21 . 11/14/2016
Lpitty chapter 21 . 9/28/2015
Please, please please update!
Guest chapter 21 . 6/26/2015
Update or I WILL MURDER YOU in your sleep
Guest chapter 18 . 6/26/2015
If hermione and SEVERUS are bonded in marriage and Malfoy is bonded to her aura is she married to Malfoy really and is SEVERUS not bonded to Malfoy though hermione?
Guest chapter 18 . 6/26/2015
So is Malfoy making her cut herself and starve herself too?
Guest chapter 18 . 6/26/2015
So the man who raped her in her bedroom for real not in her sleep was an incubus like her father? I thought incubus attack only in sleep but this one didn't only do that it did it in real life! But incubus feed on the imagine of the one you desire and she does not desire her dad! Where is her dad? Severus sat down on the edge of the bed and held out to her the open book. With a serious tone, he offered, "That man was not your father. He was an Incubus, brought to life by an old German spell."

Hermione's eyes widened. The shock alone was enough to delay her response, but none of it really made sense to her. She tried to move her mouth open and closed several times, trying to say something in response to that startling news.

An Incubus? A summoned demon? It hadn't really been her father? She was violated by some mythical creature? Then what happened to her real father?

"If that wasn't really my father, then where is my real father?" was the first thing she asked.

Severus sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. "I was hoping you would already know this, but the only way an Incubus can exist in... someone else's image... is if the owner of the image they're taking is dead."

Hermione heard him loud and clear and waited to feel some kind of remorse wash over her, waited to feel the sting of loss... but it never came to her.

Her image of her father had been completely ruined by a monster, and she could not find it herself at that moment to miss him. Even if he wasn't the one who had broken her.

"How can an Incubus exist? The magic for them was destroyed."

"Unfortunately," Severus said, letting go of the book as she took it from him and began reading through the page, "the Dark Lord gained access to many things that were thought to be long forgotten. He had many hiding places as well, which makes tracking his remaining artifacts nearly impossible. However, there is a good chance that he left some of his possessions with his followers. If that was truly an Incubus, I have no doubt that the book needed for such a spell was acquired by the Dark Lord and bequeathed to one of his followers. I have a strong notion that Lucius Malfoy was that follower."
Guest chapter 17 . 6/26/2015
He dad could be Malfoy polyjuiced and attacked her as her dad?! ? Also is that why is having nightmare of Malfoy? She watched as Severus' eyes became like two black stones, hardened and thinking fast. The silence was killing her, and it felt like eons before he finally spoke again.

"Well, it is obvious this is somehow Malfoy's work. Your aura, your nightmares... He did something to you that somehow tied you to him. I'm not sure what exact magic he used, but... Hermione, are you sure you had no contact with Lucius after the war?"
Guest chapter 15 . 6/26/2015
If that's the case why didn't she use that on her dad before he raped her? Hermione couldn't help but crack a small smile. "My mother enrolled me in a martial arts class at a young age to learn basic self defense. That was lesson number one." She smiled a moment more before the thought of her mother began to hurt. Tearing her eyes away from the man next to the fireplace, she took a decided interest in her folded hands.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/26/2015
On the way to cureing yourself is admiring you have a problem and herm
Guest chapter 12 . 6/26/2015
Can't they see she is ill? Or does she have the glamours and charms up again?
Guest chapter 10 . 6/26/2015
But when she came out she looked at the time and say on her bed and then when I went to snape side of the story it didn't say she did that!

Hermione version After what seemed like a lifetime, and a couple times of jerking herself out of near-sleep, she finally removed herself from the makeshift comfort zone she had created within her domocile and wrapped herself in a fluffy towel she had found under the sink cabinet.

Hermione finally entered her bedroom again and glanced at the clock on her nightstand. With a grumble, she saw it was just past one in the afternoon. Giving a frustrated sigh, she flumped back on her bed and stared at the stone ceiling. It was going to be a long day of self-torment.

Snape version

He noticed she had already set up her possessions around the room, but the girl herself was nowhere to be seen. He listened carefully for a moment before hearing the sink in her wash room start running. Not waiting on her invitation, he conjured a small coffee table and two squashy armchairs to position next to the fireplace. As soon as he had settled himself next to the fire, a steaming tray of tea and bicuits appeared on the coffee table, the house elf knowing he was forbidden from the bedrooms in Snape's quarters unless he was told otherwise. It only took a couple moments of waiting before he heard her grasp the doorknob of the bathroom and emerge.


It took her only half a second to realize someone was in the room with her, but only managed a small squeak before realizing who it was. The bottom of her stomach seemed to fall out as she broke out in a cold sweat, knowing he wasn't there for a social visit. The menacing glare he had in place said it all.

"P-professor! Erm, Severus. What's, um, what can I do for you?" Stumbling over her words only caused her cheeks to burn more as embarrassment and shame flooded through her.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/26/2015
Her new room with SEVERUS next door? Or her old room as head girl? And will she still be head girl? How did Luna know about hermione and SEVERUS?
Guest chapter 9 . 6/26/2015
Was that red potion also a contraception potion too?
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