|Reviews for Shikon|
| LilHobbitBookWorm chapter 3 . 8/10/2009
These are good. Im struggling with getting people to read my Midoriko fan fiction, so i figured I'd come on here and see what other people have done. These are very good, definitely keep writing them.
For one suggestions, i think that you could add more emotion in there, but you definitely have a knack with dialogue.
| InuMangaFan chapter 2 . 6/3/2008
In the manga, there was a man who secretly yearned for Midoriko, which is how the huge monster was formed.
Love could be for the man somehow, how he hated and loved her.
Wisdom could be for Midoriko's decioson in the final battle
Good story by the way