|Reviews for Haunting us|
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 10 . 12/30/2007
It's all crammed together. You have great ideas, but they aren't expressed as well as they could be.
But it was this way for everyone at some point. And I do look forward to seeing your writing style improve as you continue to publish your work.
And if you ever need help, don't hesitate to ask. I would be glad to help give your ideas form.
| lala3553 chapter 3 . 12/17/2007
love it keep writeing