Reviews for Fat
Fred's fanatic chapter 1 . 4/20
I had to return to this exquisitely beautifully sensitive
Well written one shot it's become my favourite one that
I'm hoping will be turned into a much longer love story
Between these two whom are ideal for each other mainly because they're opposites .personally being
A good friend is one thing but thinking hermione was
Going to waste away over Ron is stupid she's better than
That so is Fred by the way hot dignity dog he's divine.
I've definitely loved this story it has only the greatest
Most touching feel good vibe to it making it completely
Original so congratulations you've gone further than
Any other writer yet I've loved their great stories also
Though I'm excited about the direction you could go
When hopefully you write some more longer chapters
That will captivate and bewitch your loyal readers even
More with this truly unforgettable mesmerising remarkable love story I'm hooked already please
Do continue with it your as great as jk Rowling trust
Me .love Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 1 . 3/30
Being tall and willowy is so highly over rated she's just
Perfect and it's more fun trying on clothes anyway but
TeenAge girls are notorious as they worry which they
Should be as lucky as hermione and have a certain Fred
In their corner he knows true beauty when she cries in
His arms plus he's better though I'm going to take issue
With something his uncles Gideon and Fabian prewett
Whom were twins were the same height absolutely
Sinfully handsome smoking hot courteous kind gentle
Yet fierce warriors witches fought over but I've loved
This extremely emotional moving sensitive classy
Great humor throughout plus honesty caring spunkiness
Everywhere she's gorgeous inside and out but thank you
For tackling this problem in such a truly great creative
Imaginative exceptionally well written way as this has
Become my favourite one shot permanently as it made
Me cry happy tears then laugh delightedly as Fred spoke
The truth love is what matters but could you pretty please turn this enthralling one shot into a much longer
Love story that your loyal readers would happily and
Avidly read forever .and I was told when I was younger
I should prefer to be a blonde yet I'm a redhead so this
Story is going to become one of the most eagerly read
So thank you very much for writing this sensational
Story Elizabeth skinner.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
I absolutely adored this one shot! I haven’t read a decent fremione one shot in ages
Mintley8 chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
*clapping* perfect. Thank you x
BrownieJune chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
So cute !
Kelsey441 chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
This was positively adorable. It looks like you're not really writing anymore, and I'm really sad about that. I wish you well in whatever you're doing now.
Kelsey441 chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
Aw, you're using the book version of Fred, as far as physicality, not the movie version. I mean, the Phelps brothers were just perfect, but they didn't fit physically.
roon0 chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
This was lovely, thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2017
Amazing hope you do more of them. Maybe I, if I can, suggest you do a next chapter of the lovely romantic Fred and Hermione.
Grahamgirl93 chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
Fred was to sweet... great story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2017
More please
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
I love this!
AnnaOxford chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
Hated the insecurity and fat comments, loved the rest.
nanniepoppy17 chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
This story is genius! I love it when a guy consoles a girl about her looks, cause lets face it, all girls think that at some point or another. And that's sad... anyway Fred was so sweet and you really showed what a guy might feel. Fred's embarrassment but also determination to make Hermione feel better! I love it and good job!
Prince Pondincherry chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
It's funny to think of Fred returning to his childhood home to pick up his girlfriend for a date.
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