|Reviews for Parallel Hearts: A Parallel Legend of Zelda|
| luisAM21 chapter 7 . 2/5
i wonder if the hero's shade will show up in this story?
| CoronaCrown chapter 10 . 11/28/2015
Crap, I was hoping it was Cia. Ah, well. Beggers can't be choosers. Also, I love how you crossed it over with Smash. I was a bit dubious at first, but it turned out really well.
| CoronaCrown chapter 7 . 11/28/2015
THAT WAS CIA AND THE THIRD INSTALLMENT OF PARELLEL WORLDS WHICH I HAVE NOT READ YET WILL BE IN THE AFTERMATH OF HYRULE WARRIORS AND WILL FEATURE ROBIN AND CHROM AND LUCINA GODDAMMIT I HOPE I'M RIGHT I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
| GrandmasterRed chapter 11 . 6/10/2015
watch?v2cS1nL3lvXg The PHAAANTOM of king Ganondorf
| Axcel chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
Vaati knew that Midna had travelled with the Hero, right? So, he should have expected the worst-case scenario, since Link was involved.
| Saria 3 chapter 2 . 2/21/2014
I like Navi
| RyoKushei chapter 11 . 1/10/2014
I know this is kind of late to post this, but your work is fantastic and I would love to read another one of your fics!
| SubtleKitsune chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
Absolutely crazy good. I hope you get around to writing the direct sequel to the first one - Link, Samus Fox, and Marth are my favorite Smashers, and I'm always happy to see them interact. I love how you keep threading these through and around the canon games. Love the story, the setting, and the time shenanigans. Keep writing!
| Vivi3030 chapter 11 . 2/3/2013
Loved your stories! I'm eager to see the next one, whenever you finish it. You're a fantastic writer.
| AeronOfTheGuildOfThought chapter 8 . 11/19/2012
Happy, happy, much confusion!
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/1/2012
Hi its me! Go Gigure you DID had a TP based Zel Fic lol.
Very good! Looking forward some SS one.
| Gastogh chapter 7 . 12/25/2011
After 'Parallel Symphony', this one does seem the weaker sibling. Some points:
- Link and Zelda's 'ageless bonds of destiny'-thing is disappointing. The idea that they're just one of many instantiations of some platonic Destiny that repeats itself over and over, the Hero and Princess and big bad Ganon/Ganondorf/Mandrag... It just feels *sad*. Empty. "Seen that before" on steroids. To top it off, there's a good many things throughout the story that reinforce that same conclusion; L&Z getting flashbacks to their earlier lives, Ilia and Midna giving up on Link and the reasons they gave for doing so (chickens bloody chickens), "our natural attraction" as Zelda put it in chapter five...
Some folks like Navi, Mido and Saria still being around after all this time had potential, but that, too, fell flat; Mido's little remarks and Navi's constant reminders of how we're not looking at unique individuals but the results of some repetitive Casting Process of Destiny really rubs it in.
- This one added little of any novelty after 'Symphony.' Indeed, recycling the old stuff only makes it fade faster. It tried to step into the shoes 'Symphony' left behind, and failed, sadly.
- As before, the fights drag on, only more so now, what with the recycled characters. And since this time no one dies or gets permanently injured mentally or physically (unless I misremember), pretty much *all* of the fight scenes feel like filler. No risk, no excitement. 'Symphony' didn't have much of a casualty count, either, but at least it had one: Senza and Zelda's father, plus Aveil if she counts. I suppose not having people die or get maimed goes with the tone you've chosen and makes for a more lighthearted narrative, but it also detracts from the meaningfulness of combat.
- IMO, the story should be split into two separate entities. A full half of 'Hearts' is more of a crossover pastiche than a Zelda story. Or possibly a Brawl fanfic - I dunno. In any case, I won't review it because I dislike crossovers and that's no fault of yours, nor something I'm saying you should be trying to correct; just label things correctly and don't try to give the readers what they didn't sign on for.
| shadowrallen chapter 5 . 9/7/2011
| StandUpEvenIfYouStandAlone chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
| Beforethedawnbreaks chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
I can never get enough of this story you wrote, i wish they would let you publish it!