|Reviews for Empathy|
| EdwardCullensGirl09 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I relly don't like Jasper that much, and not many people are brave enough to write about him, but that was very good. I liked it a lot and it was very well-written. Great job!
| bellarina chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
i really enjoyed your look into jaspers viewpoint. its one of the few ffics ive read that portray bella as the bloodthirsty newborn she will be according to meyer's books. i hadn't really thought about the effect that will have on poor jasper who already struggles so much with his thirst. thanks for a believable pov for both jasper and bella!
| mgouda chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
amazing peice. i absolutly love all your stories. i'm very jealous right now. :D
| 0zephyr0 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Another awesome story ; ) It's not sloppy at all, I loved it! You don't see much from Jasper's POV so it was great to get this from you, especially since you're such a great writer ; ) Nice choice of a quote at the beginning too, I really like it.
Oh, and I loved this line: "a very familiar exasperated sigh. It took me moment though to realize it wasn’t Edward." it made me laugh heh heh
| You're My Insatiable Addiction chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
That was amazingg. point blank.
Honestly, I put your fanfics right up there with Stephenie Meyer's actual books.
I love the way that you put so much emphasis on Jasper and his feelings, and his abilities too. He's always been one of my favorite characters because he's so mysterious, and I've always wondered exactly what it's like to feel other's emotions, and how he feels about everything.
it was seriously really, really good.
| whitetrillium chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
This was a very inciteful look at the unique aspect of what Bella and Jasper share. Very nicely done. I hope you will continue, and I hope they can help each other - maybe Jasper will be inspired by her determination at some point?
| ouisa chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I think this it the most powerful Twilight based story I have ever read. It illustrates the consequences of the Cullen's choices instead of focusing on the happy fairy tale parts. It's what happens after the happily ever after that we rarely get to see. Thank you!
| Ell Michelle chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I really liked this. A lot of people have written stories where the smell of blood doesn't bother Bella at all. I don't think that is how it would be. As much as I would like to think that, I just don't. I never thought about how Jasper would feel, having to deal with a newborn's thirst as well as his own.
| dot823 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
this was really good!
| alicegotavision chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I love this story. Not only was it well writen, but you didn't do the dumb bella is immune to human blood thing. Very good job!
| starlightwilight chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
You call THIS sloppy? Are you kidding me? It was AMAZING! It raises some very important issues about how life for everyone, not just Jasper, will be with a newborn Bella. I think you captured Jasper's personality amazingly as well, especially some of the little aspects of his character that some people overlook... such as that he would want to tough it out, hoping that it will make him stronger. Very well written, very well done!
| okaie chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I don't really know much else to say other then it was really absorbing, seeing the intense emotions felt from each character, especially Jasper and Bella. And then the angst and remorse that Jasper can sense from each character, and then later finding Bella probably feels it about tenfold. Really, this story was about emotions and control. And to me, this hit the mark; writing wise, style wise, and the entire portrayal. Really great. :)
| wdpgpijw chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
It's interesting to hear more about Jasper.
| Alenor Peredhel chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Wow! This story was amazing. It was really nice that it was Jasper's point of view as well, we never see much of him 'properly' written. But you did a fantastic job. Nice touch too with how Bella would have felt, I can really see it happening. Haha, the bet thing made me laugh. How sad that's its absolutely true. There was only one point of concern with me. Why was Emmett's Jeep out? You would think that it would be easier for him to run than drive. Otherwise really good!
| LeighK81 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I didn't think your writing come off as sloppy at all. It was more like I was reading a novel instead of a piece of fanfiction over the internet. Your use of detail was superb.
Keep up the good work.