Reviews for Before Bedtime
17stepsdown chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
This went differently in my head...
riptocs chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
pervy thoughts...
gaara'sGurl101 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I like this it was funny
DancingPinkCows chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
At the first sentence I was disgusted that someone wrote something like this, starring a 7 year old. Yet I read it, and it was hot, and I'm ashamed of myself. I found it odd too call it plastic-thing, but I guessed it was from a seven years old point of view. Then came the end, and I was like "WTF? FDGFGFHFDHFDHFH" though I'm happy it wasn't what my pervy Yaoi mind thought, cause' it would be disgusting is someone actually wrote such a lemon. Oh well, I probably won't be able too brush my teeth tonight
Good Boy's Uke chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
XD That's hilarious, at first I thought it was a thermometer, then when you said that he was moving it around in his mouth I realized it was toothbrush...
Captain Isa Von Pickles chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
LOL! From what I thought upon reading the first half of this story, I now know just how much of a perv I am. XD

Deidara and Sasori: *back away slowly*
Ninjashallow chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
hehe that was really funny!
Plain Jane Is A Vampire chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
O.O I'll never brush my teeth the same way again, lol. Yay SasoDei though.
Renji's Baby Sister chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
lol! that was hilarious, its soo much fun to make the simplest things sound so friggin negatice ahahaha, the white liquid does taste funny
JasmineRiddleXAngelOfDarkness chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
okay i have a dirty mind... i thought it was something else for a minute there... totally cute!
Aranel Naur chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Come on, we all are perverts)) Hehehe Oh man, this was naughty. That was a hottie. Like Dei and Sasori are. Yes, Sasori's got Dei accustomed to this thing when the blonde was only 7, jeez. That means by his 20 he would be quite a professional in the sphere of sexual services) Oh, what am I thinking about?))
Bastet Cat chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Yosh! I like this fanfic so much XD Lol..it's great..OMG..I read it whit my mouth drooling..but the end..OMG...You are Brilliant XD
Windup Dollie chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
*nosebleed*

Sasori: *slaps* you perve!

Me: D:?
backwardsUP chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
yeah yeah yeah yeah!

love it!

i guess...

this means...

i'm the ultimate perv?

i mean, i'm pretty perverted.

and...this just proves it even more.

X)

great job!

my review isnt all that great, but i loved it nontheless!

yo!
Deleted by fanfiction chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Oops. hehe. i thought they where doing something else...i suppose these is how i know am a pervert...
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