|Reviews for Where In The Blazes|
| Texty Monster Halcyon chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
I found it interesting. It was written in a style similar to Huxley- it has a strangely sarcastic tonal quality that is engaging. But here is the problem: original fiction is not allowed here on FFnet, even if it's written to mimic the style of the author. It belongs on sites that accept that kind of work, such as Fictionpress or DeviantART. They'll love it over there.
Another way that this situation can be remedied is to work a little bit of a Huxley into it. You can -quite easily- work some elements of BNW into it, because your "world" isn't too far removed from it. That way, you'll comply with the guidelines.