Reviews for Flashpoint
WaqtZaya chapter 1 . 1/27/2022
Right into my favourite stories.
DeengoBlue chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
This was marvelous. You gave us concern without the moaning and hair pulling.

Sly and sparse, thanks.
girlfan1979 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Beautifully done.
dzio chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Okay, now you've done it, I have to put you in my Favorites. ;)

You perfectly understand House's and Wilson's friendship and it shows, yet again. I can see the whole scene in my mind, put the words in the actors' mouths and not one line sounds out of place. And you're brilliant at pacing the story just right, so that it doesn't drag, doesn't feel rushed, but just flows easily.

Both Wilson and House are perfectly written, but you get the Gold Star (also known as the spot on dzio's Favorite Stories list) for what you did with House here. It's just like him, to go crazy with worry, basically fall to pieces because his bestest buddy may be in trouble, and then say "You're pathetic" and somehow make it sound comforting. You put him in a completely new situation and in the role that doesn't suit him, give him a job that no sane person would trust him with, and yet he's completely in-character, all the way through. That's not an easy thing to write, so once again - congratulations. :) And many thanks, I'm glad I found your stories. :)
bulletproofweeks chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Good. Realistic. Meaningful and thoughtful. I love your stories.
Miyth chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I love House Wilson friendship. This was such a great story. In my opinion, a really enjoyable fic has four things in it: Whumpage, Traumatization, Comfort, and Closure. The last two being the most vital. People love to see their favourite character get hurt (who knows why, but we do), but we also need to know that it'll be okay in the end. This story had everything it needed and I appreciate the thought that went behind it. Great job!

MosherSlasher chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
That was incredibly well written. The characterisation was beautiful, House being caring but snarky, Wison being a little broken. And I loved the softer side of Cuddy, it's hard to find a good version of her in House/Wilson heavy fics.

Betz88 chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
Very nice. No bullshit, just crisp storytelling with an eye to accurate characterization that is SO refreshing. There is a lot of trash out there right now ... but this is definitely not!

I will watch closely to see where this goes.

Damn nice job!

Gameboy Rocker chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
This was great! Good plot, good lines, good description-you were very true to the characters.

Nice work :)
DXRULES103 chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
This was so powerful. I really loved it. Thanks.
C Elise chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
very great friendship story
Lutralutra chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Loved it! I could see it all happening - House's snarky remarks coming out of his mouth, Wilson's expressions, everything. I love the reality, the possibility of all your stories, written with a comfortable finesse and not a crude harsh style that grinds on the nerves. You have a great sense for story balance. And I can't really explain what that is, but I'm sure you feel it just like I do. I liked the shower scene - it had some nice House comfort without OOCness, and it was a creative setting.

Great job! I look forward to your next House-Wilson endeavour!
ahfurth94wyhtowihglioksglozhdg chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
moody with a side of sarcasm. me likey.
Manhttngal43 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
relly really god and intrsting. nice details and the way its played out is very emotional. awesome story!
Niente Zero chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
That was heartbreaking and lovely. Good work.
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