Reviews for Highmoon
Andrew Borealis chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Wow... This is really good. I'm not normally into an AU, but this one is... Well... really good. You have officially earned yourself a fav.
Sealy7 chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Hey! I love your writing! It's very amazing.

Now for the criticing.

When you wrote, "'Well gee, maybe I wouldn’t be pestering you if you hadn’t so rudely woken me up at five this morning. You know I came back at two thirty in the morning. Three and a half hours of sleep isn’t enough'", you should have said, "two and a half hours of sleep", not three.

Also, later in the story (at the New Years' Party) you wrote, “'We’re leaving,' I told Tetra, Ralph, and Malon. 'We have to get up early'”. It should be Midna, not Malon, right?
Pop Dragon chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
this is so cute! Midna is so funny! i like her. and i luv zelink!
galeangel chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
very cute! _
Jewelia chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
That was really good, I enjoyed reading it :)

heteroceric-heart chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Wonderful! :) I loved reading every word of this and would gladly read it again!
crimson-obsidian-rose chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Hello there,

Well first off I'd just like to say that this is the first Zelda fic I've ever read. Secondly, I've only played 1/2 of Phantom Hourglass and searched the series and characters on wikipedia. And yet, with my minimal knowledge of the series, I have to say this is one of the best romance stories I've ever read, in any genre (and I have been reading fanfiction for years!).

The plot wasn't rushed, which is something I admired, and the characters have such chemistry... it's amazing! I love how you manipulated the series characters so well, an amazing AU. You are really good, and I loved this story alot!

Fantasy Fan Girl chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Very good fic again. It was adorable with how you made her afraid of falling for Link. Very good work too. Written so well. Keep writing.

somethingborrowed3 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Ahh...That was a very strongly written Oneshot, from 5 in the morning to just after midnight on New Years Eve. Excellent Job! You also did a great job turning Midna into a human (all the other stories I've read avoided describing her). You also made Link quite dense, which I believe adds to the drama.

Great job, and I look forward to reading more of your fanfics!
MalinTheSwede chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
THIS STORY WAS SO GREAT THAT I SWORE OUT LOUD! and I never do that...I can't even describe how good this is...honestly.
The Annoying One chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Dear Lyxie,

If you ever read this know this, being an author is a great privilage. You might be write about needed to write something orginal, but remember you most likely started because you love these characters, you love this world. I hope you finish Ordinary Story, you have done what few authors have, on people are happy to get 100 reviews you got 1131 reviews on that story. Your a good author, can you really believe that writing something besides Zelda is going to be better. I think writing fanfics would be easier because you have people that love your work waiting for more. I am ok with you leaving but I don't think you will ever truly feel a sense of finnality until you completed what you started. Don't do one shots, they're just a way of putting off actually writing something good. I know what you are feeling with your Dad wanting to see what you,ve written. It's a world he doesn't understand. People may look down on fanfiction authors, but why do you care. If they don't think it's "real story writing" let them write something. There are people on here who are in their twenties and thirties. I understand not being able to share this world with people you know, but this world exists none the less. Trust Jesus to be your strength, and don't give up. We love you and if you leave we'll miss you. Remember "No man hath greater love than this, that he lay down his life for his freinds. Ye are my friends if you do as I command." ~Jesus Christ. If your dad asks to see your work, point him here and let him see there are hundreds of people that think your good, even if he doesn't apperciate fanfic, we do. God grant you peace.

The Annoying One.

P.S. If you want to get back too writing the best way is to read other fic's. Ask for a list of the best one's on your blog and I'll respond as a review to Ordinary Story.
Aeralyse chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Wow, that was amazing! As ridiculous as it is, I loved how it was nice and long, but no annoying chapter breaks.

Manus Dei chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Let's see... Well written, interesting, a boatload of sugar... I'm a bit divided. I like it, but it makes me sad. It makes me want to simle, laugh and cry at the same time, and I can't stop reading.
b4k4 ch4n chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Hehe, cute. Zelda can struggle as much as she wants but she always will end up with Link ) I love how you put the legends of different video games and turn them into musicals and plays xD Man, if there was really a Silver Baton, I would go watch it P *Cheers to Windwaker. Waves flag*

“I need to tame my wild golden locks so that I can make a good impression on other men.”
Hylian Princess chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
What can I say? I loved this one-shot. Absolutely adorable. :)
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