|Reviews for Highmoon|
| Daxo chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
hey good story
just a detail there is a little mistake when they are saying goodbye “We’re leaving,” I told Tetra, Ralph, and Malon. “We have to get up early.”
i think that is midna instead of malon
but it was a great story keep writing
| zoldyckgirl404 chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
i loved it
| Persephone Oswald Oleesen chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
That was probably the sweetest Zelda oneshot I think I have ever read. Very romantic, and error-free as far as the eye can see. I loved it, and this is definitely going on my faves list.
| Wahoo chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I always enjoy reading your stories. :) Keep up the good work!
| papilionis chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
The way you described Sheik is exactly like my older brother. “Loud, lovable, hilarious” and somewhat overwhelming when he talks to about a subject he likes. Yep that’s him, alright.
Anyways, great story and very cute ending, some typos and grammar mistakes but nothing serious.
| Link's Ocarina Babe chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
| Babykoalaprincess chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Only a few things I noticed on the final version which the blasted site messed up for you:
"Yeah, but it’syou he wants."
Space between "it's" and "you".
“- And you would notbelieve the way some of these Dukes and Counts strut around, Zelda, it’s absolutely outrageous."
Space between "not" and "believe".
Other than that, it's fine. I only realized this today when I looked back at it. Good work, Lyx! :D And thank you very much for the credit. You're the one who writes fantastic stories. xD
| footprints chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
You are without a doubt one of the best writers of feel-good stories on ffn. Link is so endearing and irresistable in this. An ansolute pleasure to read and i can't wait for your next story.
P.S. You called Midna, Malon somewhere towards the end while they're saying their farewells, but whatever.
| Nyago chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
That was so sweet and adorable :D I love the way you kept it so well even at the end for a AU. Although gets me curious to see what Link would do if he did do something about him being related to the past heroes. Ah well, I love it.
| ZoraAngel chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
I'm so glad there's a new story from you to enjoy. You really delivered with this one! I hope you continue to write because your so talented!
| Minibit chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
You do wonders with the Twilight Princess setting, and your twists and spins on Hylian history and legends etcetera never cease to amaze me.
Once again you've outdone yourself, though all the 'do him or your gay' type stuff with Zelda's relations started getting old, and yes, it did make it seem a little bit like it was all sexual attraction. If you were gonna fix anything I'd change that
but other than that two thumbs - no, wait. LACY?
*muse runs in*
call a few octopi. 32 thumbs way up!
| Amaya Zorifuki chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Let's see, my jaw is open, my heart is racing and I'm very close to happy tears right now. That was so beautiful I almost have no words. That made my evening and probably my week, I mean OH MY GODDESS! It was wonderful!
And now I'm crying a little bit, and laughing at the same time. Wow.
| there wont be a sequel chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
This is awesome! :D So very awesome, that awesome is the only word to describe it. And any other synonyms for awesome. But I like awesome better than all of them.
Thanks for sharing this awesomeness with us :]
| CrazygurlMadness chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
You know what I always say, but heck, for the public record, you're a freaking genius and I worship you.
| animevideogame freak chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
aww i loved it great story