Reviews for Forever Immortal
Hi chapter 16 . 1/5/2016
That was an amazing story!
Goddess Cure Mystic chapter 7 . 12/1/2013
hey that's my birthday! April 6, 1996! Wohh!
Alice Gone Madd chapter 15 . 2/23/2013
when are gonna update
Antara93 chapter 16 . 5/8/2012
awesome ff...loved it 2 bits but plzzz tell me dat layla wont give her self up 2 her evil self that wud just sick cuz i jst adore her...n plzzzz cont soon
cottoncandybl52 chapter 8 . 10/24/2011
cottoncandybl52 chapter 9 . 10/24/2011
this is really good. i ,love it
nightshadowlife chapter 16 . 3/1/2011
amazing story! I can't wait to see the next chapter and find out what is going on wiht Layla!
vicky-twilight-obsessed chapter 16 . 11/24/2010
i loved this story.. really. but the thing just annoyed me was how everything seemed to be focused on layla. I mean sure you said she was meant to represent a more confident bella.. but the point is that bella was also there. in every scene you made layla somehow over power or be better than bella. I found myself actually skipping over those parts. just, stick to main characters POVS. the plot is amazing but i still cant get over the whole layla factor. it was like you found her the main character.. even when edward was watching them all walk down the isle, he was describing layla with all these fabulous adjectives, and then bella came and he said one thing.. oh well, just take it into consideration for the future. not the best review i have given, but i thought this story could have been so much better. i am tolerant, but many readers probably read the first few chapters then stopped becuase it wasnt focused on bella and edward.
lynettecullen chapter 11 . 2/18/2010
Loved it!
lynettecullen chapter 10 . 2/18/2010
Yay, I loved it!
lynettecullen chapter 9 . 2/17/2010
Loved it!
lynettecullen chapter 8 . 2/17/2010
Loved it!
lynettecullen chapter 7 . 2/17/2010
Loved it!
lynettecullen chapter 6 . 2/17/2010
Loved it!
lynettecullen chapter 4 . 2/17/2010
Loved it!
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