Please please continue, I really want to know what’s going to happen

Please finish this very intriguing story.

This story has a lot of potential, but you really need to take more care with typos and vocabulary. The most glaring mistake is in this phrase; "“That’s...remarkable,” he stated, although quietly admonished that any planet..." where you have used the word "admonished" when I think you wanted "astonished." The former means "to have been scolded," while the latter means "surprised."

Wow that's one passion filled story, really full of angst. Great timing with the flash backs though as soon as you've heard enough of the torture you go to the not so bad fashbacks it's great :)

Can't wait for more

E.

UPDATE ASAP! I love this story a lot

~Dani

PLEASE continue this. It's very good so far, and you have me hooked! Don't leave me, and everyone else, hanging!

hm, not too bad, looking forward to the next chapter. merry christmas

Oh my... this is gonna be a really dark fic, isn't it? Well, I for one would have done what John did and I don't even know the whole story yet. I'd also go back and tell those monstrous poeple that if they didn't hand over the code/process to deactivate those organisms in Rodney I'd bomb them out of existence from orbit with the Deadelus, STARTING with whoever is in charge! Gr

Yeah, I'd beam up the bozo when he answered the hail, put a transponder inside him when he's unconscious and make sure to place it somewhere that would kill him if it was removed, then send him back with my ultimatum. Yep, that would be my plan.

oh man, poor Rodney. And poor John too. Both of them are in a lot of hurt right now. Can't wait to see where you go with this

Indeed a dark story, you succeeded well. please continue

Woah! Excellent start!

UPDATE ASAP! Amazing story!

~Dani

Interesting start for an interesting premise.

Oh wonderful! A RodneyWhump. And very well written so far. A very powerful start. The first lines just drew me in. Please continue soon!

Oh very goos. I like the anguish of vengeance and the I look forward to seeing what will happen next.