|Reviews for The One Who Comforts|
| Chemistry-Deaf chapter 8 . 11/10/2013
I love it! Maybe a timeskip?
| feedthegrimmjows chapter 8 . 6/1/2013
Loved this fic! I hope you decide to write more for this pair in the future!
| australia16 chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
This was a beautiful story. That is all I wish to say in regards to it. Thank you :)
| kiera-sama chapter 5 . 1/17/2012
Kawaii! I loved this chapter!
| Kioji chapter 8 . 5/26/2011
It was definitely interesting-I don't think I've come across anything like this yet. I agree-it would be hard to write a romance about a widow and an alien without-well, yeah-but you did well to emphasize the companionship element. Good luck on the teaching degree-I'm in the last inning of getting one myself. :) Good fic!
| ckrets chapter 8 . 3/26/2011
Lovely. I hope Chi-Chi eventually gets over her insecurities, but really: who can blame her?
| ckrets chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
I loved this chapter. I'm rendered speechless about how much I love this fic!
| ckrets chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
BAHAHA, I was grinning when Gohan finally caught on a caught Piccolo off guard like that. And that smirk of his...oh Gohan.
| ckrets chapter 4 . 3/26/2011
Haha, I KNEW Chi-Chi kissed Piccolo! XDDD
| ckrets chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
Everyone's IC so far. I like how Chi-Chi let all the anger inside her explode, and then after that she calmed down. It was very in character for her, especially since she had so much to deal with and never got to have that family she wanted.
| Lucyole chapter 8 . 3/4/2011
i love it it was amazing so sweet romantical and exciting
Piccolo was so cool and kind and i want somhow cuddle him
for that wordxs he say to chichi that was so cute and sweet
and chichi was so amazing to how she felt about goku
and piccola and how she had changed brilliant, gohaqn was the
best of all how he had react about the feelings from piccolo
your stroy is really good and i hope you write and sequel about
the realationship and how goku ract when he comes back for the
fighting thingie i would be very happy to read it
| Aaroniero Arruruie chapter 8 . 11/27/2010
This is epic. I just sat down and read the entire 8 chapters in one sitting. I do not regret my sore spine. Anyway I like how you have piccolo not really know what love is, and how chichi is depressed when goku dies. I repeat this is epic!
| JanellaBround chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
i love this story!
| NeverGoodbyeRoxas chapter 2 . 8/31/2010
I know this review is too late, but I had to considering what a wonderful story this is unfurling into. I've skimmed across so many DBZ fics only to discover poor grammar and a horrifying incosideration for character personality and feeling. But this fic handles ambiguity very well. What I mean is that you take an action i.e Goku's decision to remain dead and hash out its possible motives and consequences. There was a phrase in chapter 2 that struck me vividly...You wrote that Chichi wanted to come up with an answer to Gohan's question that wouldn't be "flavored by her own resentment." I think that this speaks to the audience very poignantly about our views on certain characters (we who are so quick to judge on what is right and wrong).
Sorry this review is so haphazardly written. I'm struggling with this terrible blank in my head when trying to think of a compliment for your writing. This is just that great.
| AarikazZ chapter 8 . 6/1/2010
Awesome story. I loved all of Piccolo's odd views on things. You really kept the characters realistic. Simply loved it!