|Reviews for Working Class Hero|
| WildCard2007 chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
It starts a bit slow for me, but by the end of chapter 3 I'm hooked. I can see a lot of ways this can go in terms of character development and plot. I want to see what Axel and Kilu do, I want to know what her mission is and how it turns out, and what happens in their relationship. I do suggest you trim the intro section prior to the paragraph "Axel stayed at the bar and quietly sipped his drink." Nothing really happens there in terms of the story. And I think you can introduce Axel in fewer words. Really enjoyable story so far. Let's see the rest of it!
| gumba2468 chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Interesting story premise, liked it so far...its not hooking me as aggressively as princes of the universe, you'll need more story/plot than this for people to get really hooked...I will be watching this to see how it plays out though...
| ConverseSC chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Pretty interesting characterizations, and you have me eager for more. A job mate.