Reviews for The Slytherin Hufflepuff
Owafree chapter 5 . 1/30/2011
This story really is amazing. I like how you've taken on Score's denial. Instead of trying to push Al away, he's using hormones as an excuse to pull him closer. Very intriguing.
xNomii chapter 11 . 1/29/2011
I am going to dance around as a crazy person now. Gimme a sec.

*Dances around as a crazy person.*

xNomii chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
This. Story. Is. SO. Interesting. I. Don't. Have. Time. To. Review. Must. Read. Next. Chapter.
Sheri Contrary chapter 11 . 1/4/2011
Ahhh...nice ending. Feel awful for the Potter kids...losing mum and all, but... *sigh* You should write a sequel for the daddies. )
Sheri Contrary chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
This one was a lot better looking than Kreacher, who always looked like he might drop dead at any moment. *~*~*~* I know, huh? Hehe.

Oops...I guess Mrs. Malfoy /isn't/ Astoria...since Scorpius' new GF is Elladora Greengrass (isn't that Astoria's maiden name?).

Hmmm. Girls can be so mean. Poor Albus. And...boys are blind! Stupid Scorpius!
Sheri Contrary chapter 2 . 1/4/2011
Really enjoying your story. Poor Al and Scorpius...having to deal with weirdo parents. Well...they're dad's don't seem too bad, but Ginny flying into "screaming rages" and Mrs. Malfoy (Astoria - ?) only "planning parties or buying clothing," seems strange. I guess I can picture that from Astoria (though we don't know her well), but Ginny? On second though...Molly's like that too. LOL. Poor Harry and Draco.
NepheleMagnus chapter 11 . 12/26/2010
This was bloody brilliant, I stayed up all night reading it! Love it!
nothing else is chapter 6 . 12/21/2010
Hey, I just needed some clarification on what age the boys are during what events? When Al gets beat up, when they start their 'mutual wanking', when Al is kidnapped? I'm sure it's in the text somewhere but I don't remember it. I keep thinking they are in 6th year or something when they start wanking each other but I could be wrong...I am just hoping they are past 4th year. For some reason anything younger seems weird.
lynxzpanther chapter 10 . 12/21/2010
It's one of those moments where I refuse to guess, even though I've already read it, as I've had the luck to forget. It'll be just as fun for me now either way! ) But I'm going to guess... ack... hm, not so sure, i could picture it so vividly either way. I mean, Scorpius is technically dominant in every aspect of their relationship, but...
lynxzpanther chapter 5 . 12/20/2010
How sad! Poor Al, now that thought's totally going to be stuck in his head!

Strangely, that moment made Sugar Quills become my favorite HP candy... .
lynxzpanther chapter 2 . 12/20/2010
This is probably the best fic ever. . I've been living off of it for ages, just giggling at the idea of Slytherin Hufflepuffs and all of that fun. ) I'd forgotten just how amazing it was, though, until I started re-reading it- I love it just as much this time as I did last time!
sheens142 chapter 2 . 12/9/2010
forgot to mention this so forgive the double review,


"You are going out with me now, and you're going with me to Hogsmeade on Valentine's weekend, and if you have a problem with that, I'll hex a baboon's ass on the face of your next twenty boyfriends."

i love this line, and i liked angelica too and would've loved to have seen more of her.

sheens142 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
to be honest, if i didn't love slash between two cute boys so much, your story would be completely awful. by that i refer to the unimaginative plot, elementary language, cliche characters, and horror of horrors, a fic about hufflepuffs who seem to live up to their useless stereotype (i dont think we even met any hufflepuffs, besides the brief two or three lines about those twins whoever they were). it also pissed me off a bit how the death of ginny was received by albus, even though i don't care for ginny at all. it's just that albus seems to have grown up a very naive, sheltered boy, and i can't imagine him having such a 'i'm sad, i'm going to cry a little bit, oooh hold on, i'm perfectly ok now since scorpius wants to have a romp with me' attitude to the woman who raised him. (case in point, he seemed much more depressed over Score's girlfriends than Ginny's death)


but, like i mentioned, i love bestfriend slash too much, so read the fic through til the end. soo even though there are a million things lacking in this fic, it does make for an entertaining light-hearted read with cute characters. which i imagine is what you were aiming for when you wrote it, rather than aiming for a poetic masterpiece.

all things considered, well done on completing the story and i'm sure you've provided many readers such as myself an entertaining few hours :).
LilBka chapter 11 . 12/7/2010
Just started reading this pair,you have made these characters come i can't imagine them with any other.
Spaztastic Luff chapter 11 . 12/5/2010

So cute!

Is it awful that I'm happy Ginny's out of the picture? (probably)

Anyhoo, as recommended I'm off to read 'The Slytherin Gryffindor' D
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