Reviews for Smashing The Holidays
Gonzales512 chapter 5 . 6/8/2008
Haha good story. Even though it's not christmas, it's sure a great story. Sorry 'bout Pit though... (still laughing of what the turtle said)
Dominus Libri chapter 5 . 1/3/2008
mario's cool. i own with him.

funny story; mario must be getting old with the bad mood...
Dominus Libri chapter 3 . 1/3/2008
soopa speed LOL
Dark Kyotoa chapter 5 . 12/29/2007
I was convinced that Cap'n was going to take them to a random town. That would be cool, but it would mess up the plot. Cash Cab would have been awesome too. Mario was funny, although I'm pretty sure he has been on a cab. Or a car. I think that the peach should be painted pink, for Peach's sake. Oh well, great chapter! (Goes back to frantically playing Phantom Hourglass)
Lordwindwalker chapter 5 . 12/24/2007
Great story. God that turtle was hiliarious! I just have on thing I gotta say. Your chapters are way to short! But other then that great story update before tomorrow!
Final Authority chapter 4 . 12/23/2007
For a second there, I thought they were going to walk in and find that Peach actually owned the store. Awkward...

Ah, yes. The "Blah Blah" talent. That always reminds me of Charlie Brown.

I'm look foward to the next chpater!
Final Authority chapter 3 . 12/23/2007
"Despite the fact that Mario created sound effects and puppet hands with that explanation, Pit still thought it was awesomely cool."

This made me laugh so hard. Oh, this is getting a story alert too...
Final Authority chapter 2 . 12/23/2007
And motorcycles are supposed to be dangerous?

I was giggling through this whole thing. The Mario Mobile...

Is the Pope Mobile also a tricycle?
Final Authority chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
Oh, poor Pit...

This story was really funny. I'm just like that in the morning. Except I don't have a mustache...

... or a calender. Oh, and I'm a girl. I don't think I even own overalls...

Err, anyway, great job. On to the next chapter!
Sweswe chapter 3 . 12/20/2007
This is so awesome! It’s so nice to see such a wonderful story taking such great use of great characters. Their personalities are so funny and lovable. Keep up the good work!
Royal Kenya chapter 3 . 12/19/2007
Hm...description. Try to work on description. I've noticed this in a lot of humor stories. They think just because they're funny, they don't have to take the time to add some description in the fic, but that doesn't have to be the case.

What I mean is describe soem the scenes, the people, the things, just so we can have a visual idea of what is going on. Second the sentences seem really basic. Try to make them a bit better. Your humor is great though, but try to work on these things ok?

Good luck!

Royal Kenya
Dark Kyotoa chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
Haha, my favorite scene is when the trike becomes a jet trike thing! XD SOOPA SPEED! Pit being Mario's biggest fan is good too. (I personally think it would be awesome if he were competeing with Donkey Kong for like, the last present) I guess the only real setback is that each paragraph is only like a few sentences long. Other than that, it's your kewlest story.
Sweswe chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
This is great! I love it!