Reviews for Illegitimate Love
Chikeninacoop chapter 13 . 9/7
why you gotta kill (spoiler)0000ⁿ00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000020202020282828282828282828282828282828293939329299393299239932883382 ten ten why u do dis
Chikeninacoop chapter 4 . 9/7
I don't know if I'm supposed to be sad but when tenten confronted Hinata I was laughing the whole time. not because of your great writing making it cringe more because the irony of it made me laugh. the thing that made me die to tears was when Hinata said she would rip that little shit out of her. lol
TotalyAnonymous chapter 13 . 8/23
4 years since I last read this and it still makes me cry like a baby backed bitch...
shiro chapter 13 . 8/18
Great story, but totally ruined for me because of the ending. Tragic endings can work, but i feel it is just totally out of place here. I feel Naruto and Tenten never got the conclusion they deserved.
Samupega chapter 13 . 7/11
In truth the end of this history resembles to much of Clannad, hell i could even see Tomoya and Nagisa there, and to be serious, i let some tiny tears roll over my face, i really, really, really hate the writter of this history with all of my soul, :c
it's just another primate chapter 2 . 7/9
As soon as she puked I knew XD
done chapter 13 . 7/3
I love the sad stories, and this was very beautifully written, but fuck you for that ending lol
Jwake chapter 13 . 7/3
This was an amazing story all the way through. Very bitter sweet, but enjoyed the heck out of it.
DraxAQN chapter 13 . 4/19
Every chapter was beautifully written, I couldn't stop reading this until I finished it. This was truly an amazing fic.
Ilikebedtimestories chapter 13 . 3/16
Super fucking sad never telling your loved ones that you love them
Ilikebedtimestories chapter 12 . 3/16
so sad
Ghost786 chapter 13 . 2/28
Fuck what a depressing end. I would like to favorite the story but I just cant, not after such a sad ending. Nothing really wrong with the story I just prefer happier endings.
Guest chapter 13 . 2/23
Whyyy!
Langas chapter 13 . 2/21
Great story but i didn't lke the ending
Mano de Plata chapter 13 . 1/15
hijo de puta, como pudiste matar a tenten, maldito bastardo, chupa pija, ojala alguien te mate y venda tu cuerpo a algunos mendigos para que violen tu cadaver y luego te den de comer a los perros
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