Reviews for Illegitimate Love
Rolphy03 chapter 13 . 3/18
A good story in its own right
w0tevr chapter 1 . 3/16
man I really loathe tragedies but somehow I simply can't stop reading 'em. this story is wonderfully done btw and man am I such a sucker for sappy shit smh
Seobang chapter 1 . 3/11
this was exactly what i needed in my life. tears and laughter. thank you for your creative gift.
Seobang chapter 4 . 3/11
i actually dislike hinata so kudos.
Eddyg125 chapter 13 . 2/24
I feel sad now
Guest chapter 13 . 2/20
Alright fuck you for the ending... but great story lol.
FireSharingan359 chapter 1 . 2/18
I really liked this story it was interesting. But at the same time i had some problems with it. You made it seem like it was all Naruto's fault. That tenten and every one else thought that when to be honest. If youre an adult and youve gotten drunk before you know you don't think when youre drunk. Also tenten started it with kissing naruto and rubbing her ass against his cock and it takes two people to have sex. Unless its rape otherwise if a girl gets pregnant then it is both the girl and the mans fault. Also tenten was too angry and immature to me at times. And naruto spent more time apologizing it seemed to me then them working it out and sometimes it was tenten overreacting. But anywho still a great story with a sad ending. But it made sense. It had a good amount of humor and great grammer. Good job.
Xagon Uzumaki Namikaze chapter 13 . 12/23/2017
As much as I love the story, I hate you for that ending.
Cibolm chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
Oh my, you are a monster. To make such an ending... Thank you for the story.
jesusyamato chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
Man, your Naruto is too fucking timid. He should have put Lee and Neji in their place, honestly, they're so out of character being complete hotheaded idiots.
Chikeninacoop chapter 13 . 9/7/2017
why you gotta kill (spoiler)0000ⁿ00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000020202020282828282828282828282828282828293939329299393299239932883382 ten ten why u do dis
Chikeninacoop chapter 4 . 9/7/2017
I don't know if I'm supposed to be sad but when tenten confronted Hinata I was laughing the whole time. not because of your great writing making it cringe more because the irony of it made me laugh. the thing that made me die to tears was when Hinata said she would rip that little shit out of her. lol
TotalyAnonymous chapter 13 . 8/23/2017
4 years since I last read this and it still makes me cry like a baby backed bitch...
shiro chapter 13 . 8/18/2017
Great story, but totally ruined for me because of the ending. Tragic endings can work, but i feel it is just totally out of place here. I feel Naruto and Tenten never got the conclusion they deserved.
Samupega chapter 13 . 7/11/2017
In truth the end of this history resembles to much of Clannad, hell i could even see Tomoya and Nagisa there, and to be serious, i let some tiny tears roll over my face, i really, really, really hate the writter of this history with all of my soul, :c
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