Reviews for Illegitimate Love
Pixie Duck chapter 13 . 3/13
Trash.

Not only you kill Tenten for no fucking reason, but you hint that Naruto will end up with psycho bitch, Hinata?

Whole thing is just one giant bait.
The cubic king chapter 13 . 11/29/2021
D:
ChineseChung chapter 1 . 9/11/2021
Telling you right now this is a really good story but it DOES NOT have a happy ending. This left me feeling depressed, good read bad ending.
blazing gigs 72 chapter 1 . 9/5/2021
Great story very few fanfics are written this well. Also you didn't hate on sasuke and were objective. Sauske ia the stories hiddn mvp and the end was good. You had a few inconsistencies and you did my girl Hinata dirty but overall 5 stars
Uzumaki spiral chapter 12 . 8/30/2021
I read this 7 years ago sheesh. Had to reread again!
anonymouse47 chapter 13 . 8/8/2021
Awwwwwwww
Guest chapter 13 . 5/31/2021
I regret reading this sad story but it did kinda have a happy ending still I’m now depressed from reading this fanfic
Guest chapter 13 . 5/14/2021
The best naruten story ever.
Username6166 chapter 9 . 4/20/2021
Is Tenten mentally disabled? I get that she's having a lot of mood swings and all, but she was the one forced Naruto to "abandon" her.
Ali3317 chapter 13 . 3/9/2021
I can’t take this man. She didn’t have to die. Even if they had a happy ending it still would have had impact and good impact at that. This way my heart can’t take this after I got so emotionally attached to the characters
jellatinous chapter 12 . 3/2/2021
I'm almost at the end of the chapter and I don't want to face the inevitablity just yet... Just what is with these popular naruto fics and tragic endings. Even canon ending isn't anything remotely tragic. And while it was great as a drama, I always feel like naruto is ooc in these things where he has the power to destroy countries yet people manage to outplay him and kill someone important.
Also, all the bizarro jutsu in the world and they can't deliver a fucking baby? These wizard ninjas bring the dead back to life on a per arc basis and suddenly a pregnant woman turns all that into moot?
jellatinous chapter 7 . 3/2/2021
I can't believe this bizarre timeline. Maybe it's got to do with all the evil sasuke type fics I read but the guy seems to be a perfectly sane and functional human being... His choice in women needs work though
jellatinous chapter 6 . 3/2/2021
Imagine living with your baby daddy's yandere stalker... I don't know what's worse, naruto getting beat up for no real reason, or tenten having to deal with possible nice boat scenarios at all waking hours lolol
jellatinous chapter 4 . 3/2/2021
Way too much violence for no particular reason. Typical Naruto.
It also seems like naruto is perfectly aware of Hinata's crush but pretty much ignores it.
And this is about the previous chapter, bit sasuke is a bit too cool for comfort... I guess? Dude goes missing nin for years and after getting dragged back, he's a calm and collected uchiha head and completely reciprocates sakura's feelings... What?
SuperSonic2654 chapter 7 . 12/18/2020
The rambling about Tenten was biased on my part especially when you look at the summary for the story because at the end of the day the ending made sense and I’m glad you didn’t just give Naruto nothing and have him be depressed
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