|Reviews for Illegitimate Love|
| Pato HM chapter 1 . 2/18
I'M COMPLETELY AGREE WITH:
Twigon HaloLover (This motherfuckers knows whats up, he thinks just like me!)
| Pato HM chapter 12 . 2/18
OH MY GOD I'M GOING TO CRY!
Ok. I'm fine, I'm fine. I SAID I'M FUCKING FINE!
Ok I'm not fine.
You are so going to hell for that final you lit up our hopes and then burn it to the fucking ground!
BEST STORY EVER THOUGH!
| Pato HM chapter 13 . 2/18
Motherfucker... YOU PIECE OF MOTHERFUCKING SHIT! Did you really need to do it! HUH?!
You enjoy see people crying! Because congratin-fucking-lations you succeed!
Best fic of naru/tenten EVER BITCH!
Still love it though.
| Hecseferblade chapter 13 . 2/13
I hate you, I hate you so much but I love you and your stories at the same time, it was really good but that ending made me cry. It would have been better if she survived but the feels I got from it were emence, I would rate it 49 out to 10, I take one off cus she died but other than that great story. It's goin into my favorites.
| steellord chapter 13 . 1/27
I must say that I have never injoyed a story like this it was very well write and the plot came together very nicly. The only thing I did not like however was when you gave me hope that tenten might survive and then you ended up letting her die I must say (and take NO offense to this) that was BULLSHIT I really thought she was going to live. I still haven't gotten over that she died. I will give you this I do not and I REPEAT do not cry often but how you made tenten died mad even me cry. That's enough of that really enjoyed your story
| Oblitus-Umbrae chapter 13 . 1/20
the ony thing that could have made it better wa if yiu added some music in it. Some scenes would have been more powerful if te right songs were added.
| Regis JN chapter 13 . 1/8
Goddammit! This is good, but you killed her. Oh well it was fun to read.
| javi30 chapter 2 . 1/7
that was really sad melody pray God it does not end well
| Shadow Knight the Vampire chapter 13 . 1/3
This was too sweet! It made me want to cry at the end because of how sweet Naruto was! This was an amazing story and I loved it!
| Hitori Tsuyo chapter 13 . 12/21/2013
I feel like curling up and crying (and that is a lot to say for me, cuz I haven't really cried since third grade [six years ago] this is just basically the saddest story In The world. I'd want to say great story, but I'm just so torn about tenten's death. Favorite story of all time. Funny how I been looking for smut and found this. A light year better.
| Hitori Tsuyo chapter 12 . 12/21/2013
No! No! She can't die! Fuck! Damnit! God damnit, Nanese! NANESE! ILL FUCKING BREAK THE FIFTH OR WHATEVER GODAMN WALL IT IS, AND KILL YOU! SHIT! SON OF A BITCH!
| uzumakitwinlover chapter 13 . 12/21/2013
| Shaun.van.der.Linde chapter 13 . 12/20/2013
This was almost the best story ever thank you!no spelling poblems and good planing
| Black Caesar chapter 13 . 12/16/2013
This was a great story I was extremely sad when TenTen was dying and then pass. TenTen is one of the most unappreciated characters and I just love wheen people pair her with in the way they write her.
| antheunis011 chapter 13 . 11/19/2013
snif...snif..snif..so cruel, oh this cruel world