Reviews for Illegitimate Love
Narutomaniac chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Hm very nice though their drunken language was well way overdone, also her thinking 7 inches was huge it's above average but not huge or all that impressive. Other than that great start.
TSBasilisk chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Naruto's going to have a lot of explaining to do in the morning...and a lot of dodging. The shit and kunais will be flying...
andrew boucher chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
My vote is for morning after overtime.
The-Eighth-Sin chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
heh, nice.
XxHeroxXxKillerxX chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
nice, try to get more chaps out for this one
JPMod chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Okay, so is this all there is? The story doesn't match the chapter, so I presume there is more than just this one chapter. Like what will happen the day after? Will Tenten regret making love to Naruto? Will he? Will things progressed to something more than just a one-night fling?
Mental Productions chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
dfshie chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Whitefang16 chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Great story. I hope that these two don't end up regretting the night of passion that they shared together in the morning. How will Tenten react to Naruto taking her virginity? I hope it all works out for these two.
assosson chapter 1 . 12/17/2007

Damn man, you should write more smut, its funfuckingtastic!
shadowphoenix143 chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Great chapter! I like how you played out them hooking up! Now for the fun part! The morning after, hopefully it won't be too awkward. Great work!
Kyuubi-Titan chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Wow this was to good to be a oneshot, man you gotta update and soon.
Jax9 chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Keep Writing!
crazyfoxdemon chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
i hope that you will update soon. will they start to officially go out in the next chapter?
CynicKitsune chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
So its safe to Assume More will be coming if not Your An evol bastard Anyways I like it..Imean cmon Lemon with a plot is always nice you know im just glad its not omg i love you...U do.. mhm..well crap i love you to old get drunk and fuck a better
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