|Reviews for Semper Fi, Mr S|
| spectre666 chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
That afterword...not sure if it's what you're smoking or what I haven't been drinking but...(G) Very good after action repot and vignette of life after high school. I'd like to know more of the relationship between Ron and KP. What their lives have turned to and where they are. Sounds like you're dismissing Season four and StD. Or were there complications or miscommunication. A small point, you might want to break up your longer paragraphs. Makes for easier reading on this format.
PS: Why wasn't Korak the Killer in the parade? While some of my all time favorite characters made the cut, he didn't. Rank discrimination, say I. :)
| campy chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Well, that was different. An interesting mix of Ronness and 21st century warfare. A few typos and other slipups, but fewer than most. I really enjoyed the surreal ending. Obi-Wan building a bridge, LOL.